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| Keisha Russell 2007-11-04 ch 1,  | abuseI totally understand this. Particulary the last three lines. Very good. |
| criti-sized 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseThis was a very nice poem. I liked the emotion in it and the rhymes in it that made it mesh together nicely. Not many poems can do that. Another good thing about the poem is the slow pace that it goes at that makes it worth the read. The oly thing I noticed was when you put 'lieing', it should be 'lying'. C.S. |
| Sorelliena 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseIt's very touching, and pretty much describes what love really is. For the rhyming, I think there could have been just a bit more work, though. Good poem, I'd enjoy more from you ^^ |