Amazing story, this deserves so much more credit/reviews. I love your style of writing, the mystery and the ending. Second person was a good choice. Keep it up.

Wow. That was crazy. It went from meeting up to ten years later with the kids. That was hot. What POV was it in?

This is definitely going on my Favourites list; the second person narrative is a little off-putting at first, but you make the reader glad for sticking with it - the ending might be conventional, but your style is impeccable.