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| mizu no kokoro 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abusesigh... jealous is the undoing of many. myself included don't go down that path. good job keep writing |
| sugarrose12 2007-08-13 ch 1, | abuseI liked this on a lot, too. The line "A regular Aphrodite in his eye" was thought provoking. What makes one regular? It feels like your more comfortable in this format - you seem to be able to go more in depth. Good work. And thank you for your review as well. |