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Reviews For: The Aphrodite Comparisons

mizu no kokoro
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abusesigh... jealous is the undoing of many.
myself included
don't go down that path.
good job

keep writing
sugarrose12
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseI liked this on a lot, too. The line "A regular Aphrodite in his eye" was thought provoking. What makes one regular? It feels like your more comfortable in this format - you seem to be able to go more in depth. Good work. And thank you for your review as well.
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