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| lone winter 2008-07-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseim kinda lost on the last chapter... -and i have a lot of questions... -what happened after jason threatened her? -is that the last chapter or are you going to update the story? -what happened to james and lisa? pls send me a message for the answers and oh! by the way i really liked it! i finished the whole story in an hour... |
| A Droplet of Rain 2008-07-14 ch 8,  | abusewow. what an interesting story. Even the name is quite unique. keep updating! |
| Fairytale Gurl 2008-07-05 ch 8, | abusethis is freaky but very well written. please update soon! |
| .heart.angel. 2008-06-27 ch 8, | abuseOh. WOW. I adore this fic. Really. It gives me goosebumps and I had to stay up till around 3:30am this morning to read this. I LOVE this. Wow. I love GM's character (creepy, but I love him anyways) and I love Val's as well! Well done. I can't wait for another installment. Update soon please! Your new fan, .heart.angel. |
| teardrop456 2008-06-24 ch 8, | abuseman jason is such a jerk. GM is just wierd. Why haven't they left the house yet? I would have. lol update soon! |
| The Red Mouse 2008-06-21 ch 8, | abuseWow, I guess GM isn't the only mean bastard. They're all so manipulative. It's kind of creepy. Well I hope this gets updated soon. |
| The Red Mouse 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuse@_@ wow. You are an excellent writer, I love how scary you make it. It made me a little scared and your playlists are wonderful. |
| Camille 2008-05-29 ch 8, anon. | abusehey your story is awesome! I can't wait for your next one. |
| sorceress 2008-05-27 ch 8, anon. | abusepoor Val, hope GM won't make things hard for her... GM is really a mystery... haha. good work! keep it up! |
| Lady Katreina 2008-05-26 ch 8, anon. | abuseI like that you gave GM's pov and that he seems more vulnerable. I also like that Jason begins making Val mad with the ultimatum. (Will GM dislike that Jason is "threatening" her? Will GM or James even find out?) Thank you! |
| Serai Rhifune 2008-05-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseOh, this is SO intriguing. I'm really enjoying this story very much. Creepy, mysterious...all the good things. Please continue to update...I can't wait to figure this thing out with GM! I remain your loyal reader, S.F. |
| IQuothNevermore 2008-05-25 ch 8, anon. | abuseAt this point, I've already reviewed the rest of the chapters, so now I have to review annonymously. But that's fine. Okay, here goes the rant: Oh my gosh! Now I don't care what story you update. Keep going with this one. The plot has seriously changed and is so much more exciting. I cannot wait for the next post! And I must say, this was the best line, I think: “Yeah. If you try hard enough, you can make fluffy bunnies shift slightly in discomfort.” Simply hilarious. Well, update (any/everything!) soon! |
| LovelyxXxDreams 2008-05-24 ch 8, | abusegeez what a jerk! Was he a jerk in the original?? |
| NotABanana 2008-05-18 ch 7, | abuseI am in awe. This is great writing and I'm completely hooked. Update soon! |
| I Quoth Nevermore 2008-05-17 ch 7, | abuseWoah, dude. The finding-of-chess-pieces-to-spell-something-out wasn't in the original, was it? Sah-weet deal. Love this. Please update the sequel because I'm dying to find out what is going to happen. Actually, it would be fantabulous if you updated all your stories, but I know you probs don't have the time. Anyways, update something! |