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Demeterr 2008-10-06 ch 12,	abuseah wow. this is good. I look forward to the rest.
october lies 2008-10-05 ch 12,	abusei'm in fucking love with this. christ. you're such a great/amazing/fanfastic writer. i can NOT wait for the next chapter.
Genuine Jennifer 2008-10-03 ch 12,	abuseOmg, I absolutely love this story. This and Jaded are my favorite stories on all of fictionpress. They always leave me on the edge of my seat - it's painful, but it's worth it! And I finally looked at your photo album for Horrorscape! I think Jason, James, and GM are spot on! Lisa and Val are not what I imagined, but they are still good. But, Blake just looks too nerdy - it's not how I imagined him at all. But James looks bad ass and Jason looks sneaky (ha ha, Draco is too, maybe that's why?) - in other words, absolutely perfect. Anyways, I'll say it over and over again, your story is fab! It is very original and well written. Good luck with the rest of your writing!
VampPorn 2008-10-02 ch 12,	abuseThis story is so addictive, it is amazingly written. Is it wrong that I really really like GM and that I want something nasty to happen to James? Can't wait for the next chapter
vermillion-dream 2008-09-29 ch 12,	abuseWhat an interesting update. Lots of different point of views this time. I'm pretty shocked that Lisa kissed Blake that was pretty unexpected. I guess this means GM is going to capture James to get him out of the picture. Though I don't think Val really is in love with James but it was obvious she said it to hurt GM. She's a smart character. Well, I hope you update soon. ~Vermillion
xo.music.xo 2008-09-28 ch 12,	abusethis story definently has me hooked! you should definately update as soon as you have free time. i am just dying to find out whats going to happen... but please update soon! =] but i have a question.. how come you are working on horroscape but you have horroscape 2 on your profile? if i read horroscape 2 would like idk...explain things or should i wait till this story is done?
terrorofthehighway 2008-09-24 ch 12, anon.	abuse"his heart was pounding erratically. She could feel the steady thrum pulsing against her fingers as he pulled her more tightly against him." Sorry, isn't that a bit strange? Pounding erratically-unsteadily- and it's also steadily pulsing against her? At the same time? Quite an interesting story, I can't wait to see how it develops.
SeraiRhifune 2008-09-22 ch 12,	abuseSO. GOOD. I'm deeply enthralled by this story..I really can't wait to see more character development between GM and Val. Do we ever find out his real name? Or has it been mentioned already? I'm DYING to know what's going to happen between them. And how many chapters are left until I can read the sequel? ;-) Update soon!! Please! I remain your obedient reader, Serai Rhifune
Sarahj259 2008-09-22 ch 12,	abusee! Update agian soon!
MaskedNightingale 2008-09-21 ch 12,	abuseUh oh. Thanks for updating, can't wait for more. I'm definitly as enthralled as many of your other captivated audience were as well.
d3pth 2008-09-21 ch 12,	abusehey there! just wanted to let you know that this is a really greatt story, and that u r doing a GREAT job. keep up the awesome work!
VelvetyCheerio 2008-09-21 ch 12,	abuseSorry I couldn't review this earlier. I just checked my inbox today and I had like, a billion other things I had to review. Been a tad bit sick. Still am. I don't care. This chapter was interesting. I like your writing style. If you ever become an author on the bookshelves or something like that, I'll buy your book, cause this is good and I like your other works. Thanks for updating. I still haven't seen a death yet, but I can wait. Also, blackmail is fun! Jason is kind of evil though. Not like GM evil, he's evil evil. Did I mention that already? I don't like him. Oh well. What ever happened to that other girl? Hopefully she'll return in the next chapter. She's a real ** but she adds drama to the story. THere's a pressure building up in my head and I don't know how to contain it. Velvet.
teardrop 2008-09-20 ch 12, anon.	abusefreaky GM is just nuts :P tell me, does he still try to drown val in this version, or are you changing that part ?
XX-Heart 2008-09-20 ch 12,	abuseomg omg u left us readers with another cliffhanger ending with chackmate. Ahh wat is going to happen next i wonder.
The Teller of Stories 2008-09-20 ch 12,	abuseNice work, very creepy... The Teller of Stories

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