I remember reading this a long time ago. I think I read it in one night, and I was left speachless. I'm sorry for not being able to write a better review, but English isn't my first laguage, and I really don't want to bother you with my spelling mistakes.

Anyway. It was a a long time ago, but I cried, I laughed, I just fell in love with this story, with your writing and every single little thing, and I mean every single little thing. I need to read this again, such an diamond on this site if you ask me.

Cheers

This story was so sad and beautiful. You're a great writer, you should think about having this published.

That was one of the greatest books I have ever read. I read the first chapter before and thought it was just gonna be a drama mama book and it was M-rated so I was skeptical, but when I seen the Bible verses I was intrigued. Anyway, back to the point, that was inspirational to say the least. I think I cried nearly once a chapter, and yelled at the computer in more than one occasion. My spiritual life was to say the least lacking, and I have a simple life. But that, I got it. I wasn't experiencing anything on the level she was, but I have been having my own problems, it helped to read others view of God. And the whole 'I'm there' and the arms being wrapped around you, isn't it the most amazing feeling? Just thank you, and God Bless.

Hi again :)

You have no idea what your story does to me. I almost teared up half a dozen times. But up till the end, I still could not decide if I like Nathan just a little bit.
I'm really really glad that I found your story thou, and thanks so much for sharing it. I'll take a short break before I run up on another emotional turmoil on the sequel~

Until then...

Hi there~
I don't usually review in the middle of a story, if ever I review at all. I just want to say that your story is one of the most realistic ones I've ever read; that nobody is perfect, we are all just human. I really got me thinking a lot. Its so easy to symphatise for both Nathan and Raina, no matter how flawed they are. I have a feeling that when i finish your story, my outlook to the world will be a lot different :)

Thanks for sharing.

Thank you.

I just finished this story for the first time, and I think it is absolutely brilliant. My friend told me that I needed to read it, and so I started reading..Yesterday I believe. I fell in love with the characters and the story itself. At times I wanted Nathan to fall off of some tall building, and other times I absolutely adored him or wanted to just give hime a big hug. I think it's amazing that you created a character as complex as him.


Your a brilliant writer, and I hope you continue to write. I can tell it's something you really love. I also wish the very best for you, knowing that Raina is partially based off of you. I'm so happy for you that you found God and he saved you. All it takes is faith, I think.


Well I'll end my review now. Hopefully you don't mind the rambling. One more thing though, I have a few songs that you might want to listen to. As I was reading, I was listening to them, and they seemed to completely fit the story.

Face Down - Red Jumpsuit Apparatus.
Gravity - Sara Bareilles.


Thank you for such an amazing story : )

Normally I don't review a story halfway through, but I felt inclined to express my opinion on Nathan. At first he seemed alright, but then he just turned outright abusive.

Just saying. ;)

Now, I'll go read the rest...

All I have to say is wow! This story's very, very well written! I liked it, it's amazing... and it's different but very interesting :)
Great job!

This story is like a dream. I really feel like I enter another world when I read it, a world where these people Raina and Nathan are real. Somewhere, their blood is warm and their hearts are beating. I am really, really enjoying this.

Wow. I can already tell that this story is going to deeply affect me. Your descriptions are achingly beautiful. There is melancholy in your words, a tragic beauty. You make things come alive with just a few sentences. I wanted to cry when he moved away. This is impressive.

I've heard a lot of really good things about this story from a lot of people, but I've put off reading it because it seemed...intense. Which I think it will be, judging from what you say about it in your profile. But I think I'm finally ready to read it. I look forward to seeing where this goes. I can already tell that you have talent, just from this little bit. Onto the next chapter!

You know, when I read this story, I kinda could feel why Raina stayed with Nathan for that long, even though Nathan were abusive..
It made me cry several times, it was so beautifully written and I can honestly say that (And I read A LOT) that Equinox is one of my favourite story on FritionPress.
I normally or only ocasionally don't review 'cause I just wan't to read a good story, but it felt so right to review this time, because not much I read makes me cry.
I just thought you should know how much I liked your story and to say that I'm unsure whether I believe in God or not, but something about your story just made me want to..
I didn't mean for the review to get so long, but I guess I just had a lot to say though...
Hugs, Caroline.

i have to say this was one of the most hardest stories to read! it was so intense it felt like i was actually living the story! great writing and form by the way!

In reading this story, I'm finding pieces of myself. You've got me thinking, reflecting on everything I've done to turn out the way I am. You've got me so emotional, in reading this, it's tearing me into all these little pieces. I've been up all night, just reading. Reading & thinking. It's a mystery. Everything's a mystery to me now. Just wake up, be a simple little robot, moving with the crowd. It's tearing me up, & I don't know why.