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Reviews For: The Merry Go Round of Love

lilhelplessaznwithabigheart
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuseaw...i never imagined tat a simple merry go round could be the start to someone's love life...tat was so sweet!
masterful me
2008-01-25
ch 1,
abuseI love merry-go-rounds! And the fluffier, the better. For now (I like my angst too).

This just made my day. Thanks!
concerto49
2007-08-19
ch 1,
abuseHeya. Concerto.
Guess this could have had more description - there was just too much dialogue that made it a bit like a play more. Could have dived in more to the emotions/thoughts/feelings of the characters. Explain things a bit more - more detail.
It was sweet and soft. Hm.
Reminds me of when I was young.
Other than that it was cool.
Anyhow. Cheers.
twinklee
2007-08-17
ch 1,
abuseAw, it was short but it was so sweet! yeah i basically melted :]
ihrtbks
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseAw...the magic of the carnival. Makes me wonder exactly what their relationship was before the kiss. One small thing though, you switch tenses at the end; it should be "we never forgot".

GREAT JOB!
SisterBear
2007-08-13
ch 1,
abuseThis was really cute. I enjoyed reading it. I liked how it ended with them married and watching their children play. This was really good

~SisterBear~
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