i liked it, but i can't understand why. it was simple and at the smae time it gave me such complex feelings. like how yu can love someone with all your heart, but still hate them. i liked it, buti don't really know why. i just did. Essie

Oh, fantastic. I get the image of a twisted utopian society where people genetically mutilate themselves so they're "in style". I like the way you write it from the point of view of the sky. Especially the last paragraph.

How can I say this-? Wowzers. This was the most interesting story that I have every read. It was pretty sad to read, and I actually felt like crying a little. It's sad that someone (I presume the sky) wants the Deer Boy dead. You have good grammer and good wording. Just a quick Q, who's Saint Taxidermy? :)