Bwahaha! Like mother, like daughter. This was extremely amusing. You had many a punctuation mistake, and some run-on sentences, but the simplicity and brevity of the story were great.

-McQuinn

Since you were the first person to review re-vamped Melody I decided to R&R something of yours.

This was very funny and rang true of how most mothers react. :D

*Sparkle

well... i didn't expect that

LOL it is because of the possibility of me having a girl and having conversations like this that I will NEVER EVER EVER have children.