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Reviews For: Pray for Rain

Zonne 2008-03-11 ch 1,	abuseThat's actually very sweet. Wish it didn't end that way though.
Parchment Quill 2008-01-26 ch 1,	abuseI cried so much while reading this, the ending was so sad. But, I still loved it, great job.
Ramenluver 2007-08-19 ch 1,	abuseIt would have been ironic if you said he died from being struck by lightning. Or that might make it kinda comical. lol (OMG, I'm so horrible for saying that.) Good choice of words. Nice story overall. :) -Ramen
lizz 2007-08-16 ch 1, anon.	abuseoh.my.god. this is so amazing! i dont even know what to say other than wow! lol, gosh i am so jealous of your skills. lol!
Blithe smilE 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseAW...a tear was brought to my eye...amazingly vivid in every which way...:D Loved it!...AWESOME WOOT-NESS! :D
Karma.Rose 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abusethis is probably the best one shot, or fiction story for that matter, i've read on fiction press in what's been i think 2, 3 years now. your ability to really paint out a picture seems effortless, and not only that, you made me finish with that complete empty, lonely feeling. it's really beautiful, i have no critic whatsoever, i think i'm going to read your other work. well done, it really is amazing. - stella x
Beautifula 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseThat was really beautifully portrayed romance. Such a perfect, almost fantasy like image of love and rain and then the sadness of losing someone and missing them. I liked this one a lot, especially because I love the rain.
burn our city 2007-08-13 ch 1,	abuseThis piece really reminded me of something I would write, so of course, I liked it! :P The comparison between the rain and the kiss was nice, good job there. I'm not sold on that second to last paragraph, though. I like the constant questions, but I think some of them could be phrased differently. I'm not sure, though. Anyway, good stuff!

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