I saw the title on this, and I immeadiatly knew I should read it. The last stanza was my favorite, especially the last two lines, "Three cheers for this chemically altered,/sugary sweet haze." Your writing is amazing. You seem to have some sort of sadness inside of you that seeps into your words, but also a beauty that contorts them until they almost seem happy... I know, I'm odd =]

k.X

Wow. Brutal. Absolutely brutal. I love the way you've written this piece. Its so shocking and intense. Excellent, excellent job! I'm adding this to my favorites.

WOW! i liked it.very... different. but i like different, i really got into it. good job!

Michelle

Its harsh but wonderful and I love it.

So emotive and blatant. Brilliant work.

OMG I love it, i love it, i love it!! but u already knew that. it's exactly how i'm feeling right now. Dude, u rock! I knew u had more poetry in u.