|Reviews for Study|
| delicate-death 8/19/07 . chapter 1
It the feeling of being a leader. keep writing.
| JM Stone 8/17/07 . chapter 1
I really like your poem. It's very true.
| Aurora Wendhart 8/14/07 . chapter 1
I liked the thought put into this...and yeah, I'm reviewing because it struck a chord in me. That's exactly how I feel about all the studying I do.
The last three lines sum it up perfectly, good job. Just a few grammatical things (sorry, I'm really picky with stuff like this, but it's easy to fix, right? The concept you have is great.)
In the first two lines, if it's past it'd be 'spent' (it is past, right?). The fourth line from the end would be 'I lead others to safety', or 'I lead others safely' (the first is a smoother way to put it). Or, if you like your poem the way it is, you can just disreguard this paragraph.
I'm putting this on my faves list, anyways.
| concerto49 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Hm, we do lead a learning life, and no one will stop learning forever.
Guess we have something inside us that will alert and teach us how to react when danger hits. It's our instincts.
Maybe the persona's just different.
It's more point and perspective.