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Lerene
2007-10-30
ch 2,
abuseI love this story so far. It's really good. I like the style you have.Can't wait to read more.
Afraid of the Dark 1989
2007-08-14
ch 2,
abuseOk another review from me. . . Well this certainly wasn't what i expected!! I love it its so random!

KEEP ON WRITING! FASTER!

Bye for now
Afraid of the Dark 1989
2007-08-14
ch 1,
abusePretty dman funny beginning or i thought so even if it wasn't meant to be!!

Erm just two things because I'm picky lol (bet you wish you hadn't asked me to read these now!!) Well firstly in the first few paras at one point you change to first person just for a moment which is kinda confusing and. . . You said there instead of their somewhere towards the end bit . . . Well I'm off the read the resty now but its pretty damn good already and I'm hooked!!
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