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HelloLovely
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseI love this. I am such a hopeless romantic.

Love,
Becca
JamieBell
2008-05-27
ch 1,
abuseFun stuff!
gulistanlik
2008-04-29
ch 1,
abuseI'm on a fluff reading spree, sorta. I'm loving it! Seriously! I had that whole dipping thing in the pit of my stomach. Love it! hehe.

gulistanlik
Kicon
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseI loved it! Really cool.

~Kicon
kardula
2008-04-20
ch 1,
abuseaww, and another really cute story from you. you know, you're really good at that! i love all of your writing! :)
spring robins
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseYay!! I have nothing to criticize.
shy green rock
2008-04-05
ch 1,
abuseAww so cute!
LiMay
2008-03-19
ch 1,
abusecute =)
katieee
2008-02-23
ch 1,
abuseHANA YORI DANGO. Man. You watch it too? Bahaha. I sent the link to my friend because she LOVES Doumyouji & HYD.
AH,
This was wayy to cute. I loved it. :]
cherrypiesizzle
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseHe looked back at her and nodded slowly, and they both turned when they heard someone else calling for him. He slowly turned his eyes back to the girl to find her smirking at her. He slowly stood up. “You said don’t let people put me down,” he answered slowly.


Might want to cut back on the 'slowly's. But, I loved this, it was cute and real x)
Sweet Child
2008-01-04
ch 1,
abuseGotta' love the fluffness.

It was cute, awesome, amazing, adorable, and so much more. To cut it short - you did a fantastic job. And Bee and Jake are really good together. Although, I would steal him if I could...
chocolaterain
2007-12-30
ch 1, anon.
abuseaww. POWER TO THE FLUFF! fluff is awesome. sorry i'm to lazy to sign in. Please don't get angry
Vidavril
2007-12-15
ch 1,
abusegreat!
emerald
2007-12-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh gosh. Now that,was adorable. *sigh* Aw! He's so into her.! Oh, the cheesiness, I absolutely loved it.
helplessly in love
2007-12-10
ch 1,
abuseaww was this all to the story i really like it though.
and also very very cute.
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