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relapse into change 2007-12-08 . chapter 1
this is beautiful and makes my heart ache just a (little) bit
it's so powerful and i love it, really
by His blood 2007-09-12 . chapter 1
You come to me with your scars on your wrist
You tell me this will be the last night you're feeling like this
"I just came to say goodbye
I didn't want you to see me cry, I'm fine"
But I know it's a lie

Chorus:
This is the last night you'll spend alone
Look me in the eyes so I know you know
I'm everywhere you want me to be
The last night you'll spend alone
I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go
I'm everything you need me to be

Your parents say everything is your fault
But they don't know you like I know you they don't know you at all
"I'm so sick of when they say
It's just a phase, you'll be o.k. you're fine"
But I know it's a lie

This is the last night you'll spend alone
Look me in the eyes so I know you know
I'm everywhere you want me to be
The last night you'll spend alone
I'll wrap you in my arms and I won't let go
I'm everything you need me to be
The last night away from me

Bridge:
The night is so long when everything's wrong
If you give me your hand
I will help you hold on
Tonight
Tonight

Chorus

Altro:
I won't let you say goodbye
And I'll be your reason why
The last night away from me
Away from me


-

Even if I say, "It'll be alright,"
Still I hear you say you want to end your life.
Now and again we try to just stay alive.
Maybe we'll turn it all around 'cause it's not too late.
It's never too late.

Maybe we'll turn it all around 'cause it's not too late.
It's never too late.
(It's never too late.)
It's not too late.
It's never too late.

-three days grace

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these songs are for you. ♥

iloveyou. please hold on. i know you can. you're one of the strongest people i've ever met. i need you. i need your writing. you are so beautiful ... i just wish you believed me.

stay strong.

love,
alison
HauntedMisery 2007-08-26 . chapter 1
Wow, all of your pieces are so beautiful, and this is no exception.
"you are just another reminder of why
i can’t be perfect"
Love it.
Great job!
Moon-Chaser 2007-08-14 . chapter 1
Wow, this is a powerful piece. I can't relate to having scars and people remind us of things we don't want to remember when we are trying so hard to just get by.

Keep it up.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-08-14 . chapter 1
beautiful but really full of such bright-burning pain. i hope things get better for you- genuine hurt radiating from it, but you portrayed a fragile subject so vividly so kudos.
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