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Demonic Huntress
2008-06-02
ch 5,
'Tis very good! I quite enjoyed. :)
Aleksy The Flying Onion
2008-05-13
ch 1,
Ahahahaha! I love the last line. I also really love her name! Did you make it up? It's very unique.
FireFallon
2007-08-25
ch 4,
Amazingly awesome...update!

(said in a creepy deep ** voice)
Ever since first man has walked this Earth I have been here
To whisper seeds of doubt and evil thoughts into his ear
I am the beast, the outcast angel fallen from on high
I go by many names by there is one you cannot deny

(Said in a high pitched 'gay man's' voice)
My name is Satan, hi everybody!
Ahh, let me tell you a little about myself
My friends all call me old scratch and I am a Capricorn
My turn ons are romantic walks and killing the unborn
I've got little devil horns, and a little Goatee,
little devil eyes to help a little devil see
little cloven hoofs that make it kinda hard to ski
I'm Satan, Woo Hoo!

Mephistopheles

My real name is Beelzebub, but you can call me Beelz
I love to watch Fox news and then go club some baby seals
Then I'll take a bubble bath and drink a Zinfandel
Try to wash off that baby seal smell

And then I'll make a toast to me
Hey, here's to my hell..
My name is Satan. Ah Hah!

To carry on my evil ways I went and had a son
And now he makes his living as a singing comedian
I'm in every Zeppelin album
I'm in all Rush Limbaugh's rants
I'm the reason that the Boston Red Sox even had a chance

And if I want to eat your soul, I'll just throw it on a griddle.
I don't need to make a deal, I don't need to tell a riddle
And f**k Charlie Daniels I don't care if he can fiddle
I'm Satan.

The Devil went down to Georgia, he was looking for a soul to steal
That's f**king ** because I wouldn't be caught dead in Georgia
Ok, it's like Oh my God!
Six, Six, Six!

~Its an amusing song by Stephen Lynch if you have a chance try and find the song to listen to you'll roll over laughing. I thought it was applicable, but mostly I thought you'd get a kick out of it! Update!
Aroes Sylverthorne
2007-08-22
ch 4,
I like it! I hope you update REAL soon. Please? K, see ya l8r!
Marie
2007-08-22
ch 4,
haha the devil has long eyelashes.
Great story, can't wait to see the next update.
AlainaW
2007-08-21
ch 4,
The ending was amazing... I giggled for a few minutes after I read it. I am left wondering if her family will notice? But beautiful work yet again. I'll write again as soon as you update, till then.
I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa...
2007-08-21
ch 4,
I hope she causes havoc in his home.
Sayae
2007-08-19
ch 3,
Damn...guess you can buy anything on Ebay these days...go on. I love it
AlainaW
2007-08-17
ch 3,
Fantastic - I think I'm falling even more in love with your story and I can't afford a relationship right now lol. Keep updating, I can't wait to see where this is going!

I really hope we get to see a little more of Ivan aka the devil soon. He's just to cool disappearing with the leaves.
I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa...
2007-08-17
ch 3,
Hm, so my hunch was correct! Yay me! I'm curious to that anagram...wait, is it for...I do evil?
Katherine A. Rossetti
2007-08-16
ch 3,
I LOVE THIS STORY! Its humorous and well written.

Seriously, it rocks and her little brother reminds me of my little brother so much that it's creepy (they're even the same age!)

Just curious how do you pronounce Asphodel,just so I know if I'm getting it right.
italylover
2007-08-16
ch 3,
seems intresting. can't wait for your next update.
I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa...
2007-08-15
ch 2,
Nice story! Is the careers adviser the one who bought her soul?
AlainaW
2007-08-14
ch 2,
I'm in love with this story - please continue soon!
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