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| Demonic Huntress 2008-06-02 ch 5, | 'Tis very good! I quite enjoyed. :) |
| Aleksy The Flying Onion 2008-05-13 ch 1, | Ahahahaha! I love the last line. I also really love her name! Did you make it up? It's very unique. |
| FireFallon 2007-08-25 ch 4, | Amazingly awesome...update! (said in a creepy deep ** voice) Ever since first man has walked this Earth I have been here To whisper seeds of doubt and evil thoughts into his ear I am the beast, the outcast angel fallen from on high I go by many names by there is one you cannot deny (Said in a high pitched 'gay man's' voice) My name is Satan, hi everybody! Ahh, let me tell you a little about myself My friends all call me old scratch and I am a Capricorn My turn ons are romantic walks and killing the unborn I've got little devil horns, and a little Goatee, little devil eyes to help a little devil see little cloven hoofs that make it kinda hard to ski I'm Satan, Woo Hoo! Mephistopheles My real name is Beelzebub, but you can call me Beelz I love to watch Fox news and then go club some baby seals Then I'll take a bubble bath and drink a Zinfandel Try to wash off that baby seal smell And then I'll make a toast to me Hey, here's to my hell.. My name is Satan. Ah Hah! To carry on my evil ways I went and had a son And now he makes his living as a singing comedian I'm in every Zeppelin album I'm in all Rush Limbaugh's rants I'm the reason that the Boston Red Sox even had a chance And if I want to eat your soul, I'll just throw it on a griddle. I don't need to make a deal, I don't need to tell a riddle And f**k Charlie Daniels I don't care if he can fiddle I'm Satan. The Devil went down to Georgia, he was looking for a soul to steal That's f**king ** because I wouldn't be caught dead in Georgia Ok, it's like Oh my God! Six, Six, Six! ~Its an amusing song by Stephen Lynch if you have a chance try and find the song to listen to you'll roll over laughing. I thought it was applicable, but mostly I thought you'd get a kick out of it! Update! |
| Aroes Sylverthorne 2007-08-22 ch 4, | I like it! I hope you update REAL soon. Please? K, see ya l8r! |
| Marie 2007-08-22 ch 4, | haha the devil has long eyelashes. Great story, can't wait to see the next update. |
| AlainaW 2007-08-21 ch 4, | The ending was amazing... I giggled for a few minutes after I read it. I am left wondering if her family will notice? But beautiful work yet again. I'll write again as soon as you update, till then. |
| I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa... 2007-08-21 ch 4, | I hope she causes havoc in his home. |
| Sayae 2007-08-19 ch 3, | Damn...guess you can buy anything on Ebay these days...go on. I love it |
| AlainaW 2007-08-17 ch 3, | Fantastic - I think I'm falling even more in love with your story and I can't afford a relationship right now lol. Keep updating, I can't wait to see where this is going! I really hope we get to see a little more of Ivan aka the devil soon. He's just to cool disappearing with the leaves. |
| I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa... 2007-08-17 ch 3, | Hm, so my hunch was correct! Yay me! I'm curious to that anagram...wait, is it for...I do evil? |
| Katherine A. Rossetti 2007-08-16 ch 3, | I LOVE THIS STORY! Its humorous and well written. Seriously, it rocks and her little brother reminds me of my little brother so much that it's creepy (they're even the same age!) Just curious how do you pronounce Asphodel,just so I know if I'm getting it right. |
| italylover 2007-08-16 ch 3, | seems intresting. can't wait for your next update. |
| I'mAFairyPrincessLookAtMeDa... 2007-08-15 ch 2, | Nice story! Is the careers adviser the one who bought her soul? |
| AlainaW 2007-08-14 ch 2, | I'm in love with this story - please continue soon! |