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| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 3, | abusetotally cool that you did it from the cats point of view... I also like how you dont know who the he is in context with the poem, but the title says it all... great job |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 2, | abuseI like this... how it changed perspectives from the first poem... and the tone is great.. I actually thought it was the girls mother until I read the title... great job |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abusevery sad, but well done the format of you would talk was well done... |
| SwitchVale 2007-08-15 ch 2, | abuseI really like the fact that the structure changed, made it very obvious that it was someone new narrating, and it worked very well with the story line. Three piece story, very inventive... |
| SwitchVale 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseOK, that was very interesting. The way the lines were broken up and that moment when you're like...'does she know george...oh dear...' yeah, that was a hit. I don't know I feel for more, the cat or Veronica. Just saying. Amazing job if you didn't get that from my ramble! |