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| labu labu 2007-08-16 ch 1, | Hey, dark ma'am. It is a touching story. I kind of understand what the girl went through. I felt the same way some time ago. seeing a beautiful me only when I am at my worst state. You really captured that feeling I had. |
| AlexiaAlisabeth 2007-08-14 ch 1, | This was very heart-felt, emotional, beautiful. It was terrifying and interesting, and you had some really good lines. I espescially liked your ending, "to face that wreckage called the love of parents." |