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| jet.and.bobsy 2008-06-09 ch 1,  | abuseI know you've heard this a bazillion times, but my favorite line was "I didn't want you to fall just yet." Amazingly sweet story. :] |
| Evolet Blue 2008-05-26 ch 1, | abuseToo sweet for words! |
| d666lisa 2008-05-18 ch 1, | abuseVery cute and very well written I absolutely adored the line: "I didn’t want you to fall just yet." :) |
| anitsirK 2008-05-16 ch 1, | abuseI love one-shots! I truly do. That was nice. :) |
| .FRANCi. 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseOh, my goodness. Reading this, I just got all fluttery. I want a guy like that. Seriously, you've painted the perfect image of my dream guy. This story was so well written and so heartfelt and beautiful. Yeah, that's it. It was beautiful. I just can't get over how beautiful it is. Great job. |
| CarlyJo 2008-05-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseAll I have to say is AW!! |
| Sour Lullaby 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseSO ADORABLE! Now I feel all warm and fuzzy... :D |
| Pinkamoo 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWell written, and very sweet. Nice job! I liked the, "I didn't want you to fall just yet." part :p |
| White Rose Blossom 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseCute :) I liked it! Awesome job! -Aria |
| EraseTheMemories 2008-05-14 ch 1, | abuseabsolutely flawless...i loved it! very sweet...adorable =] |
| Lily Llynn 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOh dang you and your innate ability to write some of the cutest oneshots I've ever read. This is fantastic. I love the characters and their chemistry, the creative plot, and just everything. The writing is fantastic - the oneshot is fantastic! (: I'm so glad artistic dreamer added this to our c2. (: |
| Jaeiyola 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseOh wow. So amazingly cute. I love it! |
| artistic dreamer 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuse"I didn't want you to fall just yet" aw! this is THE cutest line ever! can i quote you? :D haha, it's so cute! well, not just this one line, the entire story i mean, all these significant things and memories! i love it! |
| Maxegirl1313 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseSo adorable! They are seriously one of THE best couples ever |
| gulistanlik 2008-04-29 ch 1, | abuse*SQUEE*. This was a random idea. I like it! Utterly sweet and cute. Right now I've got this huge silly smile on my face, and it feels like it's permanent, for the time being. Congratulations on a job well done and thank you for a wonderful fic! gulistanlik |