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| Ginger Mae 2007-11-25 ch 2,  | abuseThis is very good, it feels like there is a lot of emotion that went into the poem. I like the last two lines especially...they end it very well. |
| PrettyHateMachine66 2007-09-23 ch 3, | abuseI like this poem, and I like how you mentioned Shakespeare, but not in the way that most people would talk about him. I also saw the blue raven allusion as well. |
| Mat 2007-09-11 ch 3, anon. | abuseI like it , its good. |
| Exiled-Knight 2007-08-28 ch 2, | abuseAnother great poem. I like how your style has evolved and matured, in a way, but it still holds the essence of who you are :D Woohoo |
| Exiled-Knight 2007-08-28 ch 1, | abuseYou haven't lost your art, I can tell you that. The fading of I want to say innocence but that isn't innocence...of fantastical notions being replaced by the real world...I know how that feels. You did a great job capturing that. |
| Mat 2007-08-23 ch 2, anon. | abuseOf the two poems i like both equal , though the line Rock n Roll with me holds alot of nostalgia attached to it. |
| PrettyHateMachine66 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseThis one's in my top 5. I think it is stronger than most of your other poems. |