|Reviews for retrospective|
| Ginger Mae 11/25/07 . chapter 2
This is very good, it feels like there is a lot of emotion that went into the poem. I like the last two lines especially...they end it very well.
| PrettyHateMachine66 9/23/07 . chapter 3
I like this poem, and I like how you mentioned Shakespeare, but not in the way that most people would talk about him. I also saw the blue raven allusion as well.
| Mat 9/11/07 . chapter 3
I like it , its good.
| Exiled-Knight 8/28/07 . chapter 2
Another great poem. I like how your style has evolved and matured, in a way, but it still holds the essence of who you are :D Woohoo
| Exiled-Knight 8/28/07 . chapter 1
You haven't lost your art, I can tell you that. The fading of I want to say innocence but that isn't innocence...of fantastical notions being replaced by the real world...I know how that feels. You did a great job capturing that.
| Mat 8/23/07 . chapter 2
Of the two poems i like both equal , though the line Rock n Roll with me holds alot of nostalgia attached to it.
| PrettyHateMachine66 8/16/07 . chapter 1
This one's in my top 5. I think it is stronger than most of your other poems.