This is very good, it feels like there is a lot of emotion that went into the poem. I like the last two lines especially...they end it very well.

I like this poem, and I like how you mentioned Shakespeare, but not in the way that most people would talk about him. I also saw the blue raven allusion as well.

I like it , its good.

Another great poem. I like how your style has evolved and matured, in a way, but it still holds the essence of who you are :D Woohoo

You haven't lost your art, I can tell you that. The fading of I want to say innocence but that isn't innocence...of fantastical notions being replaced by the real world...I know how that feels. You did a great job capturing that.

Of the two poems i like both equal , though the line Rock n Roll with me holds alot of nostalgia attached to it.

This one's in my top 5. I think it is stronger than most of your other poems.