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Ginger Mae
2007-11-25
ch 2,
abuseThis is very good, it feels like there is a lot of emotion that went into the poem. I like the last two lines especially...they end it very well.
PrettyHateMachine66
2007-09-23
ch 3,
abuseI like this poem, and I like how you mentioned Shakespeare, but not in the way that most people would talk about him. I also saw the blue raven allusion as well.
Mat
2007-09-11
ch 3, anon.
abuseI like it , its good.
Exiled-Knight
2007-08-28
ch 2,
abuseAnother great poem. I like how your style has evolved and matured, in a way, but it still holds the essence of who you are :D Woohoo
Exiled-Knight
2007-08-28
ch 1,
abuseYou haven't lost your art, I can tell you that. The fading of I want to say innocence but that isn't innocence...of fantastical notions being replaced by the real world...I know how that feels. You did a great job capturing that.
Mat
2007-08-23
ch 2, anon.
abuseOf the two poems i like both equal , though the line Rock n Roll with me holds alot of nostalgia attached to it.
PrettyHateMachine66
2007-08-16
ch 1,
abuseThis one's in my top 5. I think it is stronger than most of your other poems.
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