Beautiful ending. It's realistic, not like she just gets over it instantly. She's still sad, she doesn't just forget the incident. It's good.

Nice ending. Is the epilogue tens yars later (typical epilogue) or something else? I've only ever finished one story (Surrendering) and wish I could be a little more like you (with the finishing stories thing). Kinda hard when you're writing three stories at a time... keep writing.:)

Aw. It's great to see that she's getting better. Keep writing.
PS: I put the names of my reviewers in my bio. Just so you know I also do a little something for my reviewers, like you do for yours.

Nice chapter ending. Now please update!

This chapter is the only one so far that managed to make me cry. So sad, you really managed to convey Tristin's emotions to us readers (at least me).

I only have one thing to say: Update, please? :'(

That's a lot of people not breathing all at once. I wonder what the after effects of such a thing would be.
Very lousy airbags.

What a terrible phrasing! (by her parents)

Wow, i just dont know what to say...this story pretty much explains how i am feeling. i lost my best friend not too long ago and i felt like i had nobody to turn to for help...this story was really great, it reminded me of my best friend so much that i had tears in my eyes. it was so great...thanks.

this was intersting, i really liked it. please continue, this is so sad! :(

aww that's soo sad. =( very good though I liked it. Thanks for putting my story on your alert list!