 Midnight Adrenaline 2008-05-06 . chapter 8Beautiful ending. It's realistic, not like she just gets over it instantly. She's still sad, she doesn't just forget the incident. It's good. |
 Midnight Adrenaline 2008-05-05 . chapter 7Nice ending. Is the epilogue tens yars later (typical epilogue) or something else? I've only ever finished one story (Surrendering) and wish I could be a little more like you (with the finishing stories thing). Kinda hard when you're writing three stories at a time... keep writing.:) |
 Midnight Adrenaline 2008-03-17 . chapter 6Aw. It's great to see that she's getting better. Keep writing.
PS: I put the names of my reviewers in my bio. Just so you know I also do a little something for my reviewers, like you do for yours. |
 Midnight Adrenaline 2008-03-04 . chapter 5Nice chapter ending. Now please update! |
 Midnight Adrenaline 2008-03-04 . chapter 4This chapter is the only one so far that managed to make me cry. So sad, you really managed to convey Tristin's emotions to us readers (at least me). |
 Arina222 2008-01-11 . chapter 5I only have one thing to say: Update, please? :'( |
 Arina222 2008-01-11 . chapter 3That's a lot of people not breathing all at once. I wonder what the after effects of such a thing would be.
Very lousy airbags. |
 Arina222 2008-01-11 . chapter 2What a terrible phrasing! (by her parents) |
 Anne 2007-10-29 . chapter 4 Wow, i just dont know what to say...this story pretty much explains how i am feeling. i lost my best friend not too long ago and i felt like i had nobody to turn to for help...this story was really great, it reminded me of my best friend so much that i had tears in my eyes. it was so great...thanks. |
 Moonlight Tigress 2007-08-27 . chapter 3this was intersting, i really liked it. please continue, this is so sad! :( |
 Catcher in the Rye 2007-08-18 . chapter 1aww that's soo sad. =( very good though I liked it. Thanks for putting my story on your alert list! |