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| clumsybella15 2008-05-06 ch 8,  | abuseBeautiful ending. It's realistic, not like she just gets over it instantly. She's still sad, she doesn't just forget the incident. It's good. |
| clumsybella15 2008-05-05 ch 7, | abuseNice ending. Is the epilogue tens yars later (typical epilogue) or something else? I've only ever finished one story (Surrendering) and wish I could be a little more like you (with the finishing stories thing). Kinda hard when you're writing three stories at a time... keep writing.:) |
| clumsybella15 2008-03-17 ch 6, | abuseAw. It's great to see that she's getting better. Keep writing. PS: I put the names of my reviewers in my bio. Just so you know I also do a little something for my reviewers, like you do for yours. |
| clumsybella15 2008-03-04 ch 5, | abuseNice chapter ending. Now please update! |
| clumsybella15 2008-03-04 ch 4, | abuseThis chapter is the only one so far that managed to make me cry. So sad, you really managed to convey Tristin's emotions to us readers (at least me). |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 5, | abuseI only have one thing to say: Update, please? :'( |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 3, | abuseThat's a lot of people not breathing all at once. I wonder what the after effects of such a thing would be. Very lousy airbags. |
| Arina222 2008-01-11 ch 2, | abuseWhat a terrible phrasing! (by her parents) |
| Anne 2007-10-29 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow, i just dont know what to say...this story pretty much explains how i am feeling. i lost my best friend not too long ago and i felt like i had nobody to turn to for help...this story was really great, it reminded me of my best friend so much that i had tears in my eyes. it was so great...thanks. |
| Moonlight Tigress 2007-08-27 ch 3, | abusethis was intersting, i really liked it. please continue, this is so sad! :( |
| Catcher in the Rye 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseaww that's soo sad. =( very good though I liked it. Thanks for putting my story on your alert list! |