Reviews for You Gave Me Lemonade

Anonymous 2007-08-21 ch 1, anon.	abusei thought the story was kinda boring, and it didn't really make sense. nice try tho.
neeny 2007-08-20 ch 1,	abuseThis is wonderful. It starts off very strong, but I don't know if I really believe in his quick agreement to being painted, and the long passage of time while she's painting fails to strike me. I think it needs to be extended. The end deserves as much attention as the beginning and middle, and it doesn't seem like it really got it.
wither-wings357 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abusewow. i like where this is going, please keep writing more.