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| fishslappinghighlandflinger 2007-12-04 ch 1,  | abuseThis is so amazing. I am in awe of the beauty of your poems. ~Stan the Nerd |
| tearing hands 2007-08-27 ch 1, | abuseHaunting and heartbreaking. I loved "Her fingers glide across the invisible curve / Flatness gripping her fingertips." Of all the poems of yours that I've read, I think this is one of my very favorites. Probably of all of the poems that I've ever read. |
| whispered something profoun... 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseong this whole this is fantastically beautiful and then the last line makes it one of the best poems i have ever read. ah lovely lovely lovely! much much much respect, sunshine |
| Jessie 2007-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseOkay, this is even better. You stun me, breathtaking. I know none of this is constructive but it is all I have to offer you, honestly. I can honestly say that this on the level with the works of my college friends. |
| Faithless Juliet 2007-08-19 ch 1, | abuseThis is such an interesting piece from you - I don't think I can remember reading anything like this from your portfolio of work. The title really grabed me, but the images and the line of drama that comes through this piece is almost intiarly different. The whole piece was like a sing song of the depth of lonlieness and empanthy that I think most modern girls feel now-a-days. The idea of love as just love, or even just sex, and how that love is sometimes foolishly represented in a child - a new life, if you will, and how that life is effected and so on. You're detail was amazing, and the depth, I truely enjoyed this, I know that I've said it before, but there's such a strong maturity in your writing now. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| SirScott 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseBeautiful poem. ~SirScott |
| burning in effigy 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseintense in a low-key kind of way absolutely love your descriptions (last line made me smile) "Loneliness’ hands digging into her soul/Tearing at her emptiness and making it something more/Skin breaking into people pieces of what was/What can never be again"- sharp and honest; beautiful stanza |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-08-14 ch 1, | abuseOh? I really like the last line, it's amazing. (As always!) Rowan. |