|Reviews for Crumbled Wings|
| Kindre Turnany 8/17/07 . chapter 1
That was depressing and very interesting. I enjoyed it, in an angsty, not so happy, sort of way.
| Stella Grimshaw 8/15/07 . chapter 1
I loved the use of parenthesis you had in the poem. Good Work.
| a silenced revolution 8/14/07 . chapter 1
I like the never-ending plane crash bit. And the whole poem, of course.
| Ashelin 8/14/07 . chapter 1
Life is so harsh. Why can't we just stay young and naive? Wonderful poem. I loved how you used the parentheses. Good job.