this must be one of your more unhappy ones, eh? =) nicely done i can NOT rhyme worth my life it seems like it comes naturally to you i love rhyme and thats what i started out to do but i could never get it down pat, ya know? you got it. =)

~Niki~

I really like this one. Especially the line "You rebroke a broken heart." I also found the way it was set out to be really interesting. great job. =]