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Elle Winters 9
2008-10-04
ch 9,
abuseat the start of this (chapter) i was going to stop reading just to keep with the happy ending because i thought they would break up.

sigh*
girls and happy endings.
chrissayyy
2008-09-29
ch 9,
abuseI loved this! It was soo good! :)
jadegreen16
2008-09-28
ch 9,
abuseAw, that was really sweet, i loved it!
Audra Hornaday
2008-09-21
ch 9,
abuseThis was such a cute story. A very nice happy one. I was kind of confused at the end because I thought in the first paragraph or so you'd said they'd broken up. Then you say they're still together, I just wanted to know if they were together or broken up. Anyways, good story.
siluetamorfa
2008-09-19
ch 9,
abuseI loved it! Really, really loved it. I haven't enjoy something like these story for a while. It's amazing, the characters, the story, the romance. It made me cry and laugh and, well, I love the characters. Thank you for these great story.
Writing4Eternity
2008-09-19
ch 9,
abusecute
Jaliy
2008-09-18
ch 9,
abuseAwesome story!! very sweet!
great!
Jaliy!~
Written
2008-09-07
ch 9,
abuseshucks. that was very sweet indeed. loved the pop culture references... and the chapter where he demystifies! and this was just too cute. well done!
written
2008-09-07
ch 5, anon.
abuse(who I had Jamie love in the original writing isn't exactly cool anymore, so I had to change it, lol.)

it wasn't britney spears, was it?

haha, kidding.

lincoln is INTENSE. Can't wait to see what they get up to next.
written
2008-09-07
ch 2, anon.
abusethe awakening was far from my favorite as well :) cute story you have going here... I notice that you have more than one heroine with a scar problem.
queenehlana
2008-09-06
ch 9,
abuseOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSHOMYGOSH! THIS WAS THE MOST CUTIFUL (SORRY IF YOU DON'T APPROVE OF SILLY WORDS I'M JUST WIERD LIKE THAT :D) WHERE WAS I OH YES THE MOST CUTIFUL STORY EVER! For a little while I was absolutely terrified that this story would end badly. Sorry for doubting you I didn't mean offense!! I think I'm just paranoid from Jonnie the Girl. Seriously! I cried the ending was so sad!! Seriously though! The ending was so adorable I can't help but smile and hug my pillow!! (ya I know... I just said I'd hug my pillow.. You should have seen me hugging it earlier.. it was scary.. :D) Anyways I'll probably read your other stories too just because you're such a great author! keep writing forever! Thanks for the entertainment and wonderful read!
Queen Ehlana
queenehlana
2008-09-06
ch 6,
abuseOMYGOHHEKISSEDHERONTHELIPS! THISHADBETTERNOTHAVEAFREAKINBADENDINGBECAUSETHOSETWOARESTUPIDFLIPPINMEANTFOREACHOTHER!
queenehlana
2008-09-06
ch 5,
abuse*squeals!* OMYGOSHOMYGOSH! MR. MYSTERY KISSED HER!
queenehlana
2008-09-06
ch 2,
abuseHaha this Licoln guy is funny!! The awakening!! :D
Queen Ehlana
xWhiteWolfx
2008-09-06
ch 9,
abuseI LOVED this story! The ending made me go AW! :)

You have no idea! I like gushed at the computer screen, thinking it was so awesome! XD I'm glad I read it, and I'm glad you won an award for it! It was awasome!

PS. Happy 400 review! Just thought I'd give you the one to send it to 400!

White Wolf
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