I really like this. The ending of the first chapter was more like the beginning than the end but, it still was a great way to end it. Too bad it has been removed. I would have liked to read more of it :C

I can't believe someone would plagiarize. It's so...cold-hearted and selfish. I wish you would continue writing...

Poor you! I cant belive people would do that! I was looking forward to reading more as well but n/m. Well I hope you get it sorted and they get whats comeing to them, good luck :)

The start was kinda slow, you set the sene exellently- though you prob didnt need so much detail. The ending I liked so I think I will read more. A good start well done :)

I really really wish fictionpress could do one of those things where they prevent you from copy-pasting text so no one could bloody copy stuff unless they hacked =.='

oh my gosh...
Dude, that sucks.
I got excited when I started to read this..
damn.
Well, those girls suck. Majorly.
=/

I think you're being smart for taking your work down. I would be seriously ** off if i found out that someone was ripping off stories that i worked extremely ** (it's the reason why i haven't put anything up yet because I AM paranoid! ;). I think it's a shame that authors even have to worry about things like that! And it sucks because you're one of the reasons i even switched to FP! I think OW was somehow the very first story i read on this site and everything else i read by you had me hooked as well. but know this, you are an extremely gifted author and I'm sure that the only reason they stole your work was because they knew that they would never be able to create a masterpiece like yours! I do hope that you continue to write and i look forward to seeing OW and MW in print . . . right next to my own book . . . lol
jdl

I really hope that I get to read the rest since I liked the first chapter. I've applied at your Haven but I'm sure by the time I'm let in I'll have forgotten my current obsesion with this story. Hopefully that is not true. Good work!!

I'm sorry that your work was plagiarized.

However I feel as though you are punishing all readers by keeping in a teaser first chapter.

We are fooled into investing our time and interest in your characters only to suddenly see CHAPTER REMOVED.

Please remove the first chapter as well.

Azer

Hi, so your taking your stories off this site, will it be posted on your personal site?


Esra

I need to read this in its entirety SO BAD.
So I'm going to go find it so I can review it properly. :)

But I must say that I do like your style and how you started to write the narrative. It's so nice to read, and I'm already starting to love it.

And I'm sure you've heard this a lot, but I'm very sorry about your story getting plagiarized. That's about the worst thing, really. >:(

But I must give you my encouragement on continuing with your writing. I can already see that you have talent, and I would love to read more. ^^

If you're worried about plagiarism, I've seen some authors go to Authonomy. Check it out.

I love this story very much... and I recommended fictionpress to my friends so that they could read this story... And then I found out that this has been taken out. T_T... Number one fan here...

AW MAN. DAMN YOU PLAGIRAZIERS TO **' 'ELL. NO FLIPPIN FAIR! >

Oh God, this was beautiful.
Yes, I know I only read the first chapter but this was so nicely written.
Are you a guy? Because if you are then congratulations on the girl's POV, it was great. If your a girl well... just ignore my previous comment :P

I'm so so sorry you had to take down your storie... I really would have loved to finish reading this one 'cause it's different.

Congrats