|Reviews for Much Better|
| Sarah 4/23/08 . chapter 9
That was so cute. Definitely a pleasure to read : )
| Sarah 4/22/08 . chapter 1
I just wanted to say that Jamie's pity party is pretty much my life in a nutshell, lol. I'll review again when I've finished the story : )
| Violet of transylvania 4/19/08 . chapter 9
I suppose you are a lot alike with Jamie ? Just asking :)
But how did you get so many reviews ?
| Violet of transylvania 4/18/08 . chapter 2
Hahhaha lol I love Link XD
| Violet of transylvania 4/18/08 . chapter 1
WOa first chap is good :) I like your writing style. Would you like to read my story ? It has romance inside too but you'll first have to deal with hard feelings... :) Its called "Eternal Memories" Look for it ? :)
| watermelon.smiles 4/16/08 . chapter 9
Oh my God. You have no idea how much I love you. :D
You propelled me through so many emotions. Jamie is so much like me. I am often the ignored and it's discouraging and very self-esteem breaking... but I try so hard to stay optimistic. However, there are always soul-crushing people just waiting to ravage the last pillars of strenght left inside of you. Soon optimism just doesn't seem appropriate and I turn into a bitter old hag.
I cried and laughed and was just so generally frustrated. It really hit home. Spot-on. Oh my God... I don't even think you comprehend the magnitude that this story has affected me. I'm having my own version of the bathroom epiphany right friggin' now.
Thank you! You are a great writer. Your characters are so believable and likeable... most people can relate to them. Thank you so much. :D
| gulistanlik 4/1/08 . chapter 9
Yay a happy sappy romance! Yummy! I needed one of those.
I really liked this, even though it's a bit different than what you normally write. I'm not complaining though! hehe.
I wonder if there are many Lincolns out there...that dedicated. Can guys be that dedicated, that caring, I wonder. Does the fact that they're of a gender make much of a difference to 'default' personality traits? Don't worry, I don't expect you to answer these questions, they just keep popping up into my head from time to time, is all. D
your faithful reader and reviewer,
| gulistanlik 3/29/08 . chapter 5
I was beaming so much and so hard through their little 'act' that I could almost feel my ears popping out! Woah, that was intense. Nice excuse to touch her, Lincoln m'boy, hehe.
| gulistanlik 3/29/08 . chapter 1
| LoveMusik 3/28/08 . chapter 9
And yet another amazing story by JD Allen.
I read this all in one day because, honestly, it had me hooked.
It's short but sweet, I absolutely loved it.
I was reading your profile and when you mentioned your idea of making another story relating to the OW children, I was so excited! That series has seriously kept me hooked for a while now. I often go back and re-read my favourite parts of the stories, just because they're one of those novels with scenes that you can read and read and never get tired of it. I'm currently working on a story myself, and with the amount of stories you've posted and the amount of stuff you've been working on, you're really inspiring me. I do hope that, when it is up, people have at least a tiny bit of the excitement I had reading your stories. I do hope I can continue with the story (I'm awed at your discipline!) and keep it interesting. There are always those scenes I'm very excited to write about, but for now have to write about what happens before the certain incident(s).
SO, besides reading yet another long review by yours truly, I surely hope you attempt to get a few stories of yours published. They're amazing, too amazing to be read for free! _
| lalonely 3/17/08 . chapter 9
I don't really like to look at cast pics until i'm either halfway through or finished with a story so my imagination's not ruined. I loved Hayden as Link! he doesn't have the black eyes but I was having trouble envisioning that anyways. Very good ending. Yea I can see why this was your high school fantasy.
I guess its my college fantasy!
| lalonely 3/17/08 . chapter 5
i'm having a hard time imagining him as a handsome guy. right now he reminds me of Snape who I can't stand!
| lalonely 3/17/08 . chapter 2
I loved The Awakening! I really understood Enda Pontellier. I feel like Jamie of all people would have really understood her.
She did kill herself but I think that in those times it was a HUGE thing for a rich woman to kill herself. It was a giant statement.
| theslykit 3/16/08 . chapter 9
sigh i love this story so much that this is like my 20th time reading it..lol.
| Fightingrose 3/16/08 . chapter 9
nice, sweet and fairly classic. The writing is good and you have a good plot. I think it could use just a tad more...pop? I give it an 8/10.