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Clarelouise
2007-09-22
ch 1,
abuseyeeh go fantasy, i love the way u add in pixies and unicorns into this! i love
"Occasionally there's a silent pixie,
Disguised as a wildflower i dont know."
i can just imagine them watching her unseen! lovely imagery :)
Auraya
2007-08-15
ch 1,
abusei think what i find so beautiful about your poetry faerie is that they create such vivid pcitures in my head and this one is no exception
i love the line " a little mushroom stands stong" it's just such a cute personification
are u home for gd now? i dont leave til the 25th x
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