Reviews for Burning Havens - FictionPress.com

axis.on.a.tilt 2007-12-17 ch 1,	abuseI dig your play on words, "irridescent indigo," it makes it more real.
Auraya 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseso strong a piece for such a short poem prettiful x
concerto49 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseShort, but vivid and capturing. It's strong and all. Hm. Cool. Seems a little haunting. Anyhow. Cheers.
Julius Gillian 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseThe words disintegrating, ashen, and staining complement one another very well. I see you capitalized the word night, but why the personification? I ask because I'm not sure what effect you wanted. Maybe to give the night a more dramatic feel for the reader? I've never thought of a burning haven, but this was pretty cool. Keep writing, - Julian