This is awesome in a gory kind of way. update soon please.

>; but omg I HAD to read it and I'm glad I did! ;-; My heart goes out to poor Avery though, for all the suffering he goes through. Still, I can't wait to find out what happens~

yeah it makes me feel bad, but hurting Avery is just so hot!! Poor him, Delano should stop messing with him. Also I can't wait to find out why defect blood is just so good. Update soon!!

why do you torture Avery so much? poor avery!!

I like this story...I think I will like the ending no matter what it is...

ya knoes the drill.


i wunts morz...because it's a drug. it's that good.

omg, i bow at your awesome. SEX.

XD

YES

this is getting really really good but do us readers have to wrry about anymore holidays that will cease the progres in writing this story lol well as i have said update soon =D

Ah! Poor Avery! Give him a cuddle from me...Delano is such and ass...so, yeah, poor Avery - wait did I already say that? Sorry. Anyways sweets, please update soon!

Luv, I-B-Y-F, x

omg that is insane update soon

Nu! >.

OMFG HAWT! And yes yes, what will he do?
Sorry it took so long for me to read T_T
I lurves you!

Delano's gone psycho! AH! RUN, AVERY, RUN! Would I be creepy if I said that Delano acting crazy and like attacking Avery in this chappie was a teeny bit hot? Never mind. Anyways, yeah, amazing chapter! Update soon of course!

Yea, I noticed I wasn't getting any good shoutouts rofl. O blood blood blood blood! XD. You know me, anything demented is a love of mine hahaha

m...that chapter was yummies.

and...


*molest chapter*

you knoe you like it!! ehehe

ohh GOD.

that was so brutal! XD!! poor Avery...OH AVERY BABY!!

*Avery lies in the corner*

He's so adorably cute and helpless...

i'm feeling sadistic and...ooh good...

*fake moans*

oh averyy~`