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| DesperateWindsDoppelganger 2008-08-04 ch 17,  | abuse>; but omg I HAD to read it and I'm glad I did! ;-; My heart goes out to poor Avery though, for all the suffering he goes through. Still, I can't wait to find out what happens~ |
| uniqueindividual 2008-07-27 ch 17, | abuseyeah it makes me feel bad, but hurting Avery is just so hot!! Poor him, Delano should stop messing with him. Also I can't wait to find out why defect blood is just so good. Update soon!! |
| alex 2008-07-26 ch 17, anon. | abusewhy do you torture Avery so much? poor avery!! |
| MistressRayven 2008-05-26 ch 17, | abuseI like this story...I think I will like the ending no matter what it is... |
| Oki3xDoki3 2007-10-18 ch 17, | abuseya knoes the drill. i wunts morz...because it's a drug. it's that good. omg, i bow at your awesome. SEX. XD YES |
| Blade-of-Sorrow 2007-10-04 ch 17, | abusethis is getting really really good but do us readers have to wrry about anymore holidays that will cease the progres in writing this story lol well as i have said update soon =D |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-10-03 ch 17, | abuseAh! Poor Avery! Give him a cuddle from me...Delano is such and **...so, yeah, poor Avery - wait did I already say that? Sorry. Anyways sweets, please update soon! Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| Blade-of-Sorrow 2007-09-27 ch 16, | abuseomg that is insane update soon |
| Metalic 2007-09-26 ch 16, | abuseNu! >. |
| Demon Prince Myurr 2007-09-21 ch 16, | abuseOMFG HAWT! And yes yes, what will he do? Sorry it took so long for me to read T_T I lurves you! |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-09-18 ch 16, | abuseDelano's gone psycho! AH! RUN, AVERY, RUN! Would I be creepy if I said that Delano acting crazy and like attacking Avery in this chappie was a teeny bit hot? Never mind. Anyways, yeah, amazing chapter! Update soon of course! |
| Elegant Raven 2007-09-18 ch 16, | abuseYea, I noticed I wasn't getting any good shoutouts rofl. O blood blood blood blood! XD. You know me, anything demented is a love of mine hahaha |
| Oki3xDoki3 2007-09-18 ch 16, | abusem...that chapter was yummies. and... *molest chapter* you knoe you like it!! ehehe |
| Oki3xDoki3 2007-09-10 ch 15, | abuseohh GOD. that was so brutal! XD!! poor Avery...OH AVERY BABY!! *Avery lies in the corner* He's so adorably cute and helpless... i'm feeling sadistic and...ooh good... *fake moans* oh averyy~` |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-09-09 ch 15, | abusePoor Avery! Give him ahug from me...yeah, and make them stop being so mean, you've gotta get the little darling out of there! Anyways, update soon hun! Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |