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Nezumi13 2009-05-08 . chapter 17
This is awesome in a gory kind of way. update soon please.
DesperateWindsDoppelganger 2008-08-04 . chapter 17
>; but omg I HAD to read it and I'm glad I did! ;-; My heart goes out to poor Avery though, for all the suffering he goes through. Still, I can't wait to find out what happens~
uniqueindividual 2008-07-27 . chapter 17
yeah it makes me feel bad, but hurting Avery is just so hot!! Poor him, Delano should stop messing with him. Also I can't wait to find out why defect blood is just so good. Update soon!!
alex 2008-07-26 . chapter 17
why do you torture Avery so much? poor avery!!
MistressRayven 2008-05-26 . chapter 17
I like this story...I think I will like the ending no matter what it is...
Oki3xDoki3 2007-10-18 . chapter 17
ya knoes the drill.


i wunts morz...because it's a drug. it's that good.

omg, i bow at your awesome. SEX.

XD

YES
Blade-of-Sorrow 2007-10-04 . chapter 17
this is getting really really good but do us readers have to wrry about anymore holidays that will cease the progres in writing this story lol well as i have said update soon =D
I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-10-03 . chapter 17
Ah! Poor Avery! Give him a cuddle from me...Delano is such and ass...so, yeah, poor Avery - wait did I already say that? Sorry. Anyways sweets, please update soon!

Luv, I-B-Y-F, x
Blade-of-Sorrow 2007-09-27 . chapter 16
omg that is insane update soon
Metalic 2007-09-26 . chapter 16
Nu! >.
Demon Prince Myurr 2007-09-21 . chapter 16
OMFG HAWT! And yes yes, what will he do?
Sorry it took so long for me to read T_T
I lurves you!
I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-09-18 . chapter 16
Delano's gone psycho! AH! RUN, AVERY, RUN! Would I be creepy if I said that Delano acting crazy and like attacking Avery in this chappie was a teeny bit hot? Never mind. Anyways, yeah, amazing chapter! Update soon of course!
Elegant Raven 2007-09-18 . chapter 16
Yea, I noticed I wasn't getting any good shoutouts rofl. O blood blood blood blood! XD. You know me, anything demented is a love of mine hahaha
Oki3xDoki3 2007-09-18 . chapter 16
m...that chapter was yummies.

and...


*molest chapter*

you knoe you like it!! ehehe
Oki3xDoki3 2007-09-10 . chapter 15
ohh GOD.

that was so brutal! XD!! poor Avery...OH AVERY BABY!!

*Avery lies in the corner*

He's so adorably cute and helpless...

i'm feeling sadistic and...ooh good...

*fake moans*

oh averyy~`
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