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Night-Rayne 2008-09-06 ch 3,	abuseWow I guess I'm kinda upset theres no more after this chapter! Its just getting good! Anyways, I love this story and I can't wait for the next update!
AJ southern 2008-08-31 ch 3,	abuseThis story already has me sucked in... can't wait to find out where you take this story! Update often!!
xilaberry 2008-08-22 ch 1,	abuseI have a title idea for you you could call the first one The Color Red and call this one The Land of the Red
KelseyBell910 2008-08-16 ch 3,	abuseReally brilliant. Continue soon.
akaCHEEKS 2008-08-13 ch 3,	abusenoo!! you have to keep updating! it was really good! what happened!?!?! haha, you know amon's red hair never really struck to me as odd until now.. cause all this time i thought they all had brown skin.. like maybe really tan skin.. and that aliana's skin was just a little darker than theirs. it never really struck to me that they could be white.. hahahahaha. until now that is, that you blatantly point it out.
naivete chica 2008-08-13 ch 3,	abuseOh I can't wait for more, PLEASE PLEASE update this story soon. Your writing has matured so much since u started Land of Red I, and so have your characters. I am loving this story so much! again, please update soon!
zagato 2008-07-29 ch 3,	abusehi! i like your story. thank you
Lucey 2008-07-28 ch 3, anon.	abuseI love this story...and the sequel of course Its wonderful
Faith Adeline 2008-07-14 ch 3,	abuseI liked the first story, and this one is starting off pretty well too. I bet the girl was the queen, haha. Keep it up and update soon! Faith
Miss Maebelline 2008-06-16 ch 3,	abuseMy God, I stayed up late to read this, and the first story, and I have to admit, I'm in love with them both. It's so different than any other story I've read. I love the plot and I'm very curious as to were this is going. A few things have me slightly confused, but I'm sure that could be just from reading at such a late -- er, early time. I miss Cicario! :( I hope you write some more in his POV, because I highly enjoyed his character. Just a few questions though: What happened to Ren? Did he just go to prison or was he disowned? Since Aliana's skin was suppose to be important in the first story, and you didn't use it, will it play a large role in this one? After reading about her resemblance to the Queen and her lost past, it almost makes me wonder if her real family was royalty... I hope that Aliana and Cicario run into each other again... soon. Very soon. Just as I hope you update this story very soon. It's far to good to be left dry. ;)
Aurelia Wendel 2008-06-15 ch 3,	abusehoney, you have GOT to update soon. This is an amazing story. honestly, so far it is a lot better than your first, as far as details go. I expected there to be an illigitimate child of Cicario's and Alaina's.
2008-05-31 ch 3, anon.	abuseI love it darling. Please continue. -Keera
xX N. de Urfe Xx 2008-05-29 ch 3,	abuseI love it! you have such a talent with words and storytelling! Don't stop! and i am a huge fan of LAND OF RED - its my favorite story i've come across on Fictionpress... I'd love for u to read and review my short story - ur insight would be greatly valued :)
beccabrighteyes 2008-05-19 ch 3,	abuseWow this is an interesting, if not original, predicament...update soon please.
Natali K. A 2008-04-15 ch 3,	abusevery good. to be honest, i was a little bit unsatisfied with the length (or lack of it) considering the time it's been. however, i'm not too upset--fellow writer, and i get that whole thing. still loving it, natali k. a.

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