reminds me a bit of twelfth night (and before you feel insulted, it's my favourite shakespeare play!), and i can't wait to read more!

I hope to see this story be updated soon!

Don't stop writing! Please, Por favor. Update... do something the last story left me with a bittersweet after taste...I need conclusion.

I just finished reading the Land of Red and then found the sequel. I LOVE THESE TWO STORIES! You are a fantastic writer, the first and second stories were/are so entertaining. I kept on reading them...even when I was meant to be doing homework :S But they are just so good! :D I really hope you update Land of Red ll soon X)

I totally LOVED Land of Red 1 and 2.
Q: Does Cicario and Aliana come together at the end?

All I can say right now is wow. Why is your writing on this website and not on the shelves of Borders and Barnes and Nobles??!! I have stayed up for hours reading through this whole story and the plotline is clever and captivating, the characters dynamic and original, and your use of language skilled and flowing. No wonder your story had so many reviews; you deserve them! At first I was hesitant to read this story especially with that chapter with Ren at the beginning. I wasn't sure where this story was going exactly and I almost stopped reading. Thank goodness I didn't! thank you for sharing your work with everyone- it certainly made my day. :) Several things I noticed in this novel:

- I appreciate that Ren was a character the reader could relate to some degree. It made him seem more "real". He is definitely evil, but he has his reasons at least.

- I loved the progression of Aliana's character. How she was so naive in the beginning that she didn't differentiate between herself and her male friends at the beginning as well as her shyness etc. to the mature and confident person she was at the end. Her character evolved at a reasonable speed.

-The fact that she did not fall in love immediately. It can be incredibly distracting when three days later, the two protagonists are in love. The slow progression of their relationship made it all the sweeter.

I can't wait to find out what happens next. Apparently Cicario doesn't know what is going on. How will he react to discovering that she is in fact a "queen" now. Oh the suspense! Keep up the good work. Update update update!

Hello,

I noticed it's been over 18 months since you posted a new chapter...

Will you finish this story? or have you abandoned it..

I spent all day reading Land of Red I.
You have created amazing characters.
For example Ren...
When I read about the "bad guy" in a fanfic I get really annoyed because the author shows no reason to their actions. I know that Ren wants the title more than he wants to protect his country. Sadly, I can't say that for most stories.
Or how much Aliana grew. She went from a shy young girl to a fearless and determined woman. It wasn't a quick change where I'm left wondering what happened but you made sure to slowly make her blossom. (a gradual change. :D)

Its been awhile since I have actually been this excited to get back to my computer so I can continue reading a fanfic.

Wow... I can't wait how this story is going out, great sequel to the story, can't wait for the next chapter :)

This is a really good chapter! Please update soon!

awesome story,
can't wait until you update.

LOL. Please forget my remark about cliche-ness in the first chapter. This obviously took another turn. XD I was wrong. Forgive me.

The girl who threatened to slit her throat turned out to be the queen. At least I think so. :P I wonder why people always try to manipulate Aliana? Haha. Poor her.

Anyways, great chapter~ :D Keep up the amazing work!

Aah, Amon still recognizes her whether or not he tries to hide it. :) Note passing in secrecy! Haha! :D

Now I'm between whether or not he really did forget her or if he's pretending to have forgotten her. :\

And I still can't stop feeling sorry for Ti. I wish he still had a tongue... -sighs- ): Stupid Ren.

Loved the amazing chapter~ ;) Hehe~ Keep up the uberlicious work~

NUU! How could he forget her! What a horrible dude! -takes out shotgun and shoots him fifty million times- ): ): After all they went through...what the heck is wrong with him! ToT

Haha, the idea of the sequel is somewhat cliche, what with the main hero of the story forgetting the heroine. Well, at least that's the impression the end of the first chapter is giving me. :P

Still, it's really good. :) I love it. :D When you mentioned the four strong slaves carrying his throne, I couldn't help but wonder...what if the king was extremely obese and weighed over 400 pounds? :D Ohoho!

Anyways, a great start! :) Keep up the great work!

Keep it up! It's a good series.