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| Lovemelol 2008-08-07 ch 23,  | abuseO PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE IVE BEEN WAITING FOR YOU TO UPDATE FOR THE LONGEST TIME I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS... |
| BettyBoo 2008-08-07 ch 23, | abuseLord, I hope the last part was a dream! Because Mike is NOT worth it! |
| geminibaby6789 2008-08-06 ch 23, | abuseThanks for the chapter! Was that seriously Mike at the end making love to her? How did he get in? Even though the baby's his, I still like Jacob though. I wonder if Jacob has some deep dark secrets that he's keeping from Bella. I mean a guy can't be that perfect, right? Can't wait for the next one! Review = Update soon? :) |
| Secret-Lives 2008-08-06 ch 23, | abuseGreat update. The ending confused me, I hope it was a dream. I saw her as having more character than that and fighting a little rather than rolling over as soon as he felt like coming back. I suppose only time will tell. |
| brunettebarbie14 2008-08-06 ch 23, | abuseStop being sad and realize that people are just being lazy! lol Great update I was kind of surprised by the ending but it was a good surprise and I can't wait to see what happens next! |
| Lovemelol 2008-08-01 ch 22, | abuseYAY U FINALLY UPDATED! Does Mike ever find out that it truly his baby, does he jus leave it alone..Im so eager to know what happens next |
| geminibaby6789 2008-07-30 ch 22, | abuseThanks for the chapter! So, Mike is just going to pretend that the baby's not his? I can't wait for the next chapter! I really do not like May. Update soon! :) |
| Secret-Lives 2008-07-30 ch 22, | abuseOhh... I like it. I'm finding it really difficult deciding between which guy I want her to end up with. But I can't wait to see where you take it. |
| fuzzygreenpens 2008-07-15 ch 21, | abuseYou're Back! THanks for the chapter! So is Mike ever going to find out that that is his baby? Haha! Can't wait to find out how her dad reacts! Update soon! :) |
| The Good Reviewer 2008-06-19 ch 1, | abuseThere is one thing I think you should fix; trying not to listen in on her patient’s mother conversation.-patient's mother's converstation. I don't know whether the meeting of her old crush worked. I think you rushed through it a bit. I also had a problem with the paragraphs being cut up. I think you should fix that. I can't really tell you wether or not it's good so far, I'll have to read more. But it will be a few days until the next chapter. I have 14 stories to read and then I'll get to yours. I also am going camping for 2 days, so I think in about a week and then I will read the next few chapters. :) Bye! |
| Lovemelol 2008-06-03 ch 20, | abuseI am really looking forward 2 u reviewing i wanna know what happens next...Im proud of Bella she finally gave that jerk what he diserves...I was sitting at the edge of my seat wondering what was going to happen next...I Really am looking forward to your review I hope you review really soon |
| jaxkayy 2008-05-30 ch 11, | abusei really enjoyed reading this even though i have not finshed reading it yet. it has a lot of suspense which i love in novels,it keeps me longing for more. nice one. |
| XxUnLikelyAnGeLxX 2008-05-29 ch 20, | abuseyaya! Take down! Mike got the long a waited punch, he deserves! ^-^.I hope he doesn't mess up her future. Great chappy! |
| happy ever afterxx 2008-05-29 ch 20, | abuseUm...oops. If Mike does the math, I'm pretty sure the cr*p is gonna hit the fan. Please update again soon x |
| BettyBoo 2008-05-29 ch 20, | abuseGreat ch! more-MOre-MORE! |