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| Magdalin Fox 2007-08-16 ch 2,  | abuseOh, the Duke and a cliffhanger. I like. What can I say? I really can't find anything wrong except that I don't understand about these vampires. But, I'm sure you'll clarify later on. Well, update soon! |
| Magdalin Fox 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseOh. Interesting. I like it so far. I like the name Maera. I have a dog named Mira. I think its pronounced the same. I'm adding you to my alert list so make sure you update soon. Hm...constructive criticism. I'm horrible at these things...hmm... I really have nothing bad to say. Just keep up the good work. You're dialogue is awesome! |