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Reviews For: The Beacon
AlissaDawn 2007-08-20 . chapter 1
Good. Fast paced, and exciting. Urges the reader to go on. Not the kind of silly, everybody's-happy fast paced, but a subtle, surreal type.
Kazuki Mishima 2007-08-16 . chapter 1
That's really sweet. The last stanza is wonderful.
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