"We'll find our place together." Good rhyme.

Another good poem, but not your best one. Created a "happy" feeling, or maybe happy is too much. No, it gives a comfortable feeling. It is simple, but that by no means makes it bad. The simpleness may be found pleasing to people, and for those who don't have a poetic mind, they will understand and enjoy it.

This poem draws a very vivid, very true analogy. I got a little bit tripped up on the meter sometimes, but I loved the rhyming.

Nice feeling of investigation or adventure here.. an eagerness to go and experience all these things.. the ocean, the sky, the body.. I don't think i'm quite explaining what I want to say here very well. But I get a stong feeling of exploration here. that was the word. :P