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| Karissa 2007-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseawesome...loved the twist at the end |
| Midnightveil 2007-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseI liked the way it flowed, very nice. The metaphor between the rabbit and the wolf is also very good. Nice work. |
| Queen of Dragonnor 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseI like the rhyme scheme and the metaphor you used between the rabbit and the wolf. Nice poem. :) |