Interesting concept, I like it Lycan. The story itself is giving the readers the feeling of mystical.

Keep up with the good works yeh! XD

Happy writing.

Woohoo, massacre party of 50. Haha, seems interesting, double storylines are the best, especially when they go to the past. Looking forward to more.

Interesting, very interesting. To dream is to know the soul. Kdh.

Just from the summery I'm getting graphic daydreams - good work on that. Imagery is top notch, the book adds a bit of a curious streak to your work although something needs to be done about separating the dream sequence from the main slice. (I'm not an expert in this field but it just feels sudden as if not enough importance is set upon it.)

This is really good. I like the foreshadowing of the dream book, and the contrast between the plainness and suggested unimportance of reality and the detail and intrigue attached to the dream.

Please add more detail about the character so I can get to know her a little better.

It's an awesome start, please write more ^u^