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| Tytherpol 2007-10-04 ch 1, | abuseweird. i was going to go to a boarding school in durham this year, but my guidance counselor screwed up my application. anyway, cool piece. i love the bomb threat/nail polish quote, but i guess if it was real-life personal to me, i wouldn't find it so beautiful. nice job. ~yours, -ty. |
| Wishdreamer89 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseA bit complex and confusing at bits, but I think that's because you've got so much confusion and emotion yourself, in here. And it has a real deep personal feel to it. Your voice is clear and evident. you're not trying to cover anything up or please anyone. It just feels like...you are you and that's all you can ever be. Real nice job. |