Reviews for forever & always - FictionPress.com

smile for the sunshine 2008-01-04 ch 1,	abusethat's such a cute story. i loved it. really. and i have been there before...more times than i wish...def. a favorite. good work. keep writing.
KamaronOfNever 2007-08-18 ch 1,	abuseu should change the last "I" to a bolded "I" so it looks like "I Need You" huh? u likey it?
Kisei 2007-08-15 ch 1,	abuseI liked the pace of this, the way it sometimes flowed, but suddenly jerked and changed pace. It conveyed your feelings more strongly. I didn't like the use of "&," especially since you always used it in pairs; it's simply enough to just spell out "and." I'm also not particularly fond of things like using periods between letters of a word... and other stuff like that. It seems juvenile.