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| Devin-Jamie 2007-12-30 ch 1,  | abuseFirst reading this, my thoughts are, "Oh, I get it. Drifting from your friends- everyone can relate." Then I read your note at the bottom, and I'm glad you put it there. It makes the reader reread the poem and see something else behind its words. I can relate to that one too. Actually, in a BIG way. (my best guy friend, for almost 7 years- we're in love with each other, off and on, but it's a complex story) Anyway, I really like this. Keep writing, Devin. |
| poemkitten7 2007-12-06 ch 1, | abuseWow, amazing symbolism and imagery. Lots of emotions. This is really great! :) Keep up the amazing work. -Sara |
| lordelfy 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseaww that is so sad; i am sorry about your loss and he must not have been that good of a friend if he still didnt want to be friends with you even after he found out you were crushing on him. I am sorry ; the poem goes very well with the feeling i think you might be feeling! |
| not sure yet 2007-10-16 ch 1, | abusei like the fourth stanza a lot, it reminds me of charon and crossing the river, nice little poem |
| Kisei 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was very real and emotional. It should say "forgiven" instead of "forgave" though. |