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| Kusje 2007-08-18 ch 1, | abuseYour style of writing is really... interesting. I don't think that I've ever come across with this type of style before -- and I really take appreciation when reading this. Great job, honestly, I don't have any critiques :D |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-08-17 ch 1, | abuseI like the italic parts, it really made the poem stood out more. I don't know what to say, it's just so silent and beautiful... Good job! and thanks for the review anf fave, I appreciated it. -C.N |
| Ripped wings of a Butterfly 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abusehEavy prose you got here, but I do liked the ending of it. And the italic part made it more stand out. good work! -rippedwings* |
| Friggin Awesome 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseAll in all it was a good poem, I just think it might have gone on too long, but that is just me. |