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Satan'z Myth 2008-06-28 ch 1,	abuseI did not quite get the character of Bradley's...he wanted a relationship, right? Did he think that sex was the same as love as per his age?? But, over all, it was well-written so that made up for the rest... (not much in a 'review-mood', y'see!)
Bi-curious George 2008-05-31 ch 1,	abuse&^.^& I liked it! Especially the middle part; I did feel kinda bad for Brad, but THAT'S THE WAY IT IS SWEETUMS. I found the same thing with this chapter as I had done with the last story of yours I read...it just went by so goddamn quickly. O_O Anyways, at first when Brad and Will kissed, I couldn't decide whether it was gross or romantic. So I settled for both ^^. Having finished it, I think I'll settle for romantic now. I really love stories with an older guy and a younger guy, though, tbh, I usually don't tend to like extending it as far as almost a 15 year age gap. But I was more than willing to do so for this one &^.^& Adam btw, was a complete prick, but I understand! The melodrama was necessary! And history SO repeats itself with Will, obviously. I didn't think there was anything wrong with the sex scenes ;). Personally. If there was one small thing that I didn't really like, I guess I'd have to say the ending. I know it gave the piece a circular feel and all and was necessary, but it was a bit bathotic, you know? I read the last line and I was like '...anti-climax...O.O' And OH SHIT, GOING TO BE LATE FOR HISTORY, CIAO!
Metalic 2008-04-12 ch 1,	abusexP... when I finished reading this I decided to be stupid and said "I liked that.. that was good..." literally out loud and then dad comes into my room asking what I'm talking about ._. Which could have been the death of me had I not Xed out the window o.o. Anyway... yeah, I really like the ending, I think it's one of the best, most perfect endings I've read in a long time. I love how it's just about the same thing that happened with Will and Adam... and sort of gives it a repeating feel, like the same would happen with Brad and so on. But I'm just over here pointing out the obvious o.O... so anyway, great job, and now I'm off to read some of your others.
Tohru Daihikashousha 2008-03-13 ch 1,	abusethis... my throat got all clenched up, and I felt like I was going to throw up.. I nearly cried.. It was so touching, and just... ugh sob That sounds like a bad review, but really I think this story is so beautiful..
PhaithMcCoy 2008-03-07 ch 1,	abuseHoly shit. That was...alot of things. I really liked it. Very nicely written.
omg-wtf 2008-02-02 ch 1,	abuseThis has to be one of my new fricken favorites! Although it was a bad night for me to read it cause it made me cry xD GYAH Im gonna read it again. Love and stuffs
BrdomIsTheDvl 2007-11-18 ch 1,	abuseo.o He's a second Adam...
Let. Me. Fly. 2007-11-06 ch 1,	abuseThat's beautiful. I want to write my friend Erin a yaoi like she's saying she will one day. I believe you know her? She's the one that's in desperate need of a masquerade yaoi, while the masks stay on? Well, as a surprise I am writing her one. Do you have any hints about how to do so?
Mieke-o- 2007-10-09 ch 1,	abuseI loved this story. if all your dedicated stories are this good, I demand one! lol How funny would it be if like, instead of the piano it was...the trumpet...or flute, or tuba! XD XD Good times.
Gensougan 2007-08-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseBravo. That is all that can be said. Bravo.
Mademoiselle Rouge 2007-08-29 ch 1,	abuseOmg this is history repeating. Poor Brad. And I knew it (not that it's not common knowledge) ; artists are crazy and insane. Even though he's kinda weird, I really like what you've made of Will, and the importance you gave to his past, etc. I'm trying really hard not to think about my piano teacher (she was this really, really fat and really old lady). Anyway, I really liked it - another ending would've sucked and automatically been too fluffy and unreal. And creepy too, I guess (I'm never, ever going to tell a teen "You're my passion" when I'm old. Especially now that I got your defenition :p) Oh, and I totally get your laughing when you wrote the sex scene. I had this sex scene to write on FF after promissing one to my readers, and god, I was laughing so hard at 3am that my parents told me to shut the f up (and they asked me why i was laughing... "erm, I have funny friends sending me e-mails" ?). Whatever. This one-shot, I love. It's well written, as usual, and although it's not a 250 thousand word story, you get attached to the characters and understand well Will. I'm in awe :)
bloodsucking-llama 2007-08-27 ch 1,	abuseI really loved this - it was easy to get into and relate to the characters' feelings and whatnot. (Even though I'm nothing like them. Don't play piano. And... well, not a man either.) But yeah. Good job. =)
Mage Dudette 2007-08-26 ch 1,	abuseit was only reading your authors note saying you were laughing when typing this.. and that made me laugh too. otherwise, i thought it was a sweet/sad story, despite dodgy age gap; it's ok, i forgive you for it. i liked it though, and that they didn't work out after all. not sure why, just seemed to fit. :)
magalina 2007-08-21 ch 1,	abuse;__; But I liked it... It was sad, loved it :D
Riley 2007-08-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow... That was amazing. I really love Will's character, you did a great job with the characterization and development of the story. The ending was a bit sad, but it was powerfully moving and effective at the same time. Poor Bradley... But then again, some people are just more passionate about their art than their own lovers. It's like a disease. Anyway, great job on this story!

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