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| Anglachele 2008-01-31 ch 1, | abusePowerful and elemental. It seems to me as though it's being spoken in rage, through clenched teeth. But at the same time whispered in the dark. |
| simpleplan13 2007-10-24 ch 1, | abuseI like how this flows... the short lines are great and I really the rhyming too |
| soft-spoken 2007-08-15 ch 1, | abuseNicely done. I wasn't expecting the simplicity to do it for me, but it did. Keep it up Peace&Love -N |