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| half-sketched.staccatos 2008-04-15 ch 1,   | konnichi wa Two favorite lines: "Spinning high dreams on high (wobbly) thoughts" and "Nobody loves a nobody" The wobbly in parenthesis proves that this high, this feeling of bliss or whatever it is -- it's apt to fall. Tipping precariously. :) I love its implications, and love even more that you never stated it outright. BTW, for "nobody loves, a nobody" -- that comma doesn't belong. I found a forum from last year that you created -- you'll see my comment on that, too. Ha det -Shan- |