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| gigglebug 2008-01-24 ch 1,  | abuseReally into dreaming things, eh? I don't blame you, I try to interpret mine every chance I get. xD I know you don't want to hear anything like "you're amazing!" but I'm going to anyway, if you don't mind. except, I've already said it, so I get to spare you one. >.> nevermind, my sense of humour is a little weird. I really like the water thing. However, the woman had only taken a step back once, so is there just an imaginary tube holding in water over his head? Or is she still moving back? Or are we supposed to figure this out for ourselves? Just to think about... Later! |
| Lisa Martens 2007-11-29 ch 1, | abuseim not sappy but this was cute - especially the "It's too late...I cannot love a living woman." good one! - Lisa |
| Pishbadlarr 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseSpooky, heartbreaking, and sentimental all at once. Nice! |