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faux-prada 2008-06-07 ch 1,	abuseHi. I just started reading this, and am very intrigued thus far. You write quite well, and Bloodlust in particular is very entertaining. I've been searching for a good vampire story (to fill the void between Stephenie Meyer books) and I was having a bit of trouble. Strict stereotypes bother me, and I'm pleased that your story isn't directly lifted from the genre. It gets kind of old after awhile, you know? I like this one though. I especially am intrigued by the idea of a human being raised by vampires! I look forward to continuing it, and reading your "overhaul". -Bee PS: I'm a fan of your other works also. I particularly like "Abra Cadaver", for personal reasons and not just as entertainment :Db
ellebelle1992 2008-06-01 ch 1, anon.	abusewow! what a great first chapter! i love the last sentence btw...its kinda creepy but realy intriguing!
Beyond-the-Shadows 2008-05-26 ch 16,	abuseLOL I like it- I wanted to know what would happen in the re-done over version...so I read this one 'sheepish smile' I liked it!
MySpontaneity 2008-05-22 ch 15,	abusehi! i love your story. Vampire stories are great. But I am encountering a problem right now, Chapter 16 won't appear. So does my computer have problems or is chapter 16 really off limits? I really want to read the ending of this story! thanks =D
N.M.E 2008-05-22 ch 17,	abuseI loved this fic! It was really thrilling I'm not a great fan of thrillers or horror stories. But I LOVED this one. Maybe because it reminded me so much about the Twilight series. A lot of parts in the story resembled Twilight, New Moon and Eclipse. My favourite charecter would be Kane.I love him! And I loved the part when they kissed for the first time and when they professed that they love each other. And I loved the part they had a coven meeting and when she told everyone that she loved him. I enjoyed it a lot and now I'm going to read the sequel.
Lauranthalsala 2008-05-20 ch 17, anon.	abuseIf you want my honest opinion. I'd have to say that I loved it :D but as a few pointers. Your story is alarmingly similar to that of Stephanie Meyer's Twilight, NO OFFENSE meant, i just think that she beat you to the punch. What with the vampire stalking the girl to make sure that she keeps quite, and becoming attracted to the girl despite himself. In fact, your story seems like an extremely condensed version of the series... which i like :D Other than the initial meeting, however, your story is completely your own, that i have confidence in, others might not take it so well though, so i'm just pointing that out. All in all, i love your story and i hope you keep writing!
akaCHEEKS 2008-05-13 ch 17,	abusedude. woah good story. i love romance vampire stories man.
meygan 2008-05-12 ch 16, anon.	abuseawesome story! i couldn't stop reading until i reached the end and ended up sleeping at 6am! hahaha! definitely one of my favorite stories! can't wait for the sequel! one thing that bugged me tho was though was how Fiona's family ddnt seem to care that much about her "abusive" relationship with Sebastian... and the fact that you left the question of Sebastians "living condition" was..disturbing? for the readers part...and i love it! hahaha! great job on the story!
snowdance-lyghtning 2008-04-25 ch 2,	abuseOoh, cliffhanger. . .I liked hoow you described each character and set the scene with an equal amount of description about the town. I think switching to has helped you describe the situation better, and it also adds more to the story.
heartfeltlove 2008-04-24 ch 4,	abuseI liked this chapter! Although I don't understand how the keeper thing works. Like how do you chosen ad what are the rules(is that the right word?)
snowdance-lyghtning 2008-04-24 ch 1,	abuseGreat prologue! It's really good on grasping and holding the readers attention. It also has a lot of description which is good. Great job and can't wait to read more!
naokoangel01 2008-04-19 ch 16,	abuseThis was a great story I loved it :)
naokoangel01 2008-04-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is a great story I congradulate you
dawn9800 2008-04-16 ch 6,	abuseThis is such a good story! I'm lovin it!
anitsirK 2008-04-13 ch 16,	abuseWow! That was a very good read. Just a few thing I would like to say. 1st, you spelled dying wrong. You spelled it like this "dieing". That's one. 2nd is that there are some unclear points you may want to clear up on the rewritten version. :D Like, now what happens to her job? I mean, you mentioned a part in the last chap. something about her job. And in the part where you mentioned it, it didn't seem like her job was affected by her being a vampire. But it should be because now she can only work during the night, right? (that rhymed :) Hahahaha. ) So anyway, that's just one. There are some unclear parts yet. But, I'm sorry I can't recount them all to you because I have to go already 'cause I got something to do. I'm sorry if I'm being pretty vague about the unclear parts too. Hahaha...Sorry, I'm rushing this. But I just thought you really needed to know these. Happy writing and editing!

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