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| AlbanianAtHeart 2008-06-14 ch 1,   | M, very good. I love the imagery. The ending is fantastic, I loved the way to waited to explain what type of murder you were describing. It really makes the poem. Awesome! ~AlbanianAtHeart |
| smilingsoprano 2008-05-26 ch 1, | Wow. I love this poem. It's very creepy and dark, but in a good way. It's fitting that Poe gave you the inspiration . . . in many ways it's very like his work. The end, where the prisoner is accepting his fate, calling the cage a home, is absolutely haunting. Congrats on writing something beautiful! |
| RogueRobin 2007-08-16 ch 1, | I'm impressed. I'm honestly the only person at my school that knows what a murder is. *claps* You made me smile the whole time I was reading, even though it was a sad piece. I really liked the line where all of the birds were viewed as a single entity. |
| InViSiBlE wOmAn 2007-08-16 ch 1, | This is a very good poem As hunger claws upon my flesh, Fatigue claws upon my bones, And thirst consumes my very sanity I love those lines, they make it seem so real. Excellent job! |