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starichi 2009-09-18 . chapter 8
Adrian's 'choice of tea' had me vaguely disturbed there, but otherwise, very interesting. :D

So then, Christians his brother, mhm? How very interesting! Can't wait to see what you have planned for them~
Ahh, is Andy gone for good now? Damn. Well, now we'll never know why all the 'supernatural' were affected by him?
StangenBaer 2009-08-25 . chapter 8
I need you to update, like, now!!

I absolutely loved this, and some of the parts had me laughing out loud! I can't wait for more!

Keep it up! :)
Hell's first Icicle 2009-07-20 . chapter 8
oh the love. and the purple spandex. and the love. and the purple spandex.

and it's really, really bugging me that i can't figure out what andy IS.

and period blood.

please excuse me while i implode and spew love hearts at my computer screen.
you are not a pretty snowflake 2009-07-08 . chapter 8
Vampires are so overused these days that it's nice to see someone not disgracing the myth. Also I think Adrian is adorable (despite his choice of tea.)

Out of curiosity, you aren't a Terry Pratchett fan, are you?
fictionalboyfriend 2009-03-25 . chapter 8
"with all the calm of a caffeine addict five minutes after realising that the coffee maker isn't just not working, but has in fact spontaneously combusted." - Have I mentioned that I love your similes?
Well. I love your similes.
You aten't dead indeed! This chapter was full of win, especially after the mental image of Christian in purple spandex. I think you may have just made my week.
krlsen 2009-03-25 . chapter 3
Mannen som elsket Yngve
JerryOnigiri 2009-03-23 . chapter 8
I can't wait to read more.
JerryOnigiri 2009-03-23 . chapter 1
This first chapter is exceptionally unique although incredibly gross to think about vampire drinking blood from tampons.
fictionalboyfriend 2009-03-12 . chapter 7
Wow. I've pretty much just been bowled out of my computer chair by the sheer force of awesome.

I've only got one, tiny complaint - every once in a while, when you italicize a word, it gets stuck to the word before it. It's not a big thing, just a little distraction from what's otherwise one of the best stories I've read in ages.
Elli Fay 2009-02-27 . chapter 7
weird ending. good, but sad though =C
TheLadyPendragon 2009-02-27 . chapter 7
Your oddball vampire has just gained himself a new fan girl. No really, I have a habit of getting charmed by vampires like Adrian, who, sadly, are few and far between. Though I was a bit put off at first by the menstrual drinking thing. I mean, I use those sanitary boxes! I'd be pretty creeped out if a guy, vampire or not, took some used tampons and pads to make *tea*. But he's wrong about one thing; it would be worse to be a pervert. I mean, Adrian's doing what he's got to do. I don't suppose he could just order from a blood-bank, though, could he? lol, Period breath. Aw, I miss Andy. But Lily is right. Adrian will survive (like that old song. I will survive, I will survive!). xD He's awkwardly cute. I'd take him, you know, if he wasn't gay. *Sighs sadly* Why do I feel like I'm going to be like the French Tart someday? Anyways, update soonish.
Poptart Guava Kid 2009-01-29 . chapter 7
ah darnit. and here i was getting all attached to the story...
xClutteredxChaosx 2009-01-20 . chapter 1
I knew I would love your stories, you definately CAN review honestly and critically because you're such a good writer!(I'd tried to make that not sound patronizing but didn't manage it-sorry :P) I'm favouriting this :D
Feel The Waltz 2008-12-28 . chapter 6
When i read this story, it makes me want to marry you. In a totally non stalkerish way, obviously.
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!

Utter swine.
Feel The Waltz 2008-08-24 . chapter 7
I need to read HMC. Anyway! I love adore this story! Tis nice reading a vampire story that isn't all ANGST!SECKS!BLUDD! So brownie points for choo missy. ^_^
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