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LandUnderWave 2008-05-11 ch 7,	abuseAha! So Oracle Jenkins' name is based off of Howl's, then. I was wondering. (Have you read the sequel? It's called 'Castle in the Air', and one of my friends was completely hellbent on reading it after he'd read HMC. Fun to watch.) And I am definitely going to have to read 'Jumper' now. Adrian is fun. And certainly not your stereotypical vampire. I do like Tony, though. Zombie door-to-door salesman. The very concept is awesome. I also rather like Lily, although (as always) it's a bit weird seeing my own name written down/typed. (Yes, that is legally my name. Spelling and all.) “You've got an /experience/ coming at you.” Live in interesting times, much? grins Well done.
ManIACjAcKaL 2008-05-10 ch 7,	abuseThis story is adorable and GREAT. :)
Itsuyaya 2008-04-04 ch 7,	abuseOh, no! Adrian's pregnat, isn't he? This chapter was REALLY FUNNY! I especially liked the whole jaguar with a buzz cut thing. Now I really wish I hadn't read this chapter because the suspense might actually kill me. Just as a friendly request, so I don't die, can you finish the next chapter in the next few days? Oh, yeah! I have two suggestions for you. One, you can make a side story of what is happening to Andy throughout this. Two, you can make a humor side story about Jenkins/Oracle. You know, explain what happened to them/her and tell about a whole ton of readings she did. You could have humor, crimes, or even reunions. And the title could be "Stories from the files of Ms. Jenkins/the Oracle." And the chapter titles would be some thing like "Case #7389: The Reading of Jseef Hweu." Or not. I made up that name by randomly click on the keyboard. Now that I think of it, it sounds like it would be a really stupid series if I was the author. Lol. Your choice.
Itsuyaya 2008-03-29 ch 5,	abuseLol! The Tart is kinda funny and kinda scary. And Andy, the way and the times that he blushes makes me seriously think that this "supernatural catnip" is gay. Sorry. You tell me in the next chater. Later! ^-^!
Itsuyaya 2008-03-29 ch 4,	abuseThis is getting really confusing... Andy is way more than he seems, I think.
Itsuyaya 2008-03-29 ch 3,	abuseI know I've been saying this a lot and it's probably getting annoying, but your a really funny writter. Oh, there was a word in the last chapter that I didn't know (friend next to me screams "Quick! Someone call every news broadcasting place in America! We've got a big scoop for them! Athena Whitehead (me) sees a word she doesn't know!"(yeah, I'm a big reader/writer person, so it doesn't happen very often, but when it does happen, my friends go nuts. It's annoying, really). Anyways, the word was naina, or something like that. You said she was crying her eyes out over the latest environmental disaster. I think it's something like a dryad, but then again, you might not know what a dryad is. Lol. If you reply this, please let me know what creature you were talking about. ^-^!
Itsuyaya 2008-03-29 ch 2,	abuseLol! I thought he had a chrush on Mysterious Guy #1, as you called him! Supernatural catnip. You're really good at this. I'm gonna go see if Mysterious Guy #2 will make an appearance in the next chapter. ^-^!
Itsuyaya 2008-03-29 ch 1,	abuseThis one's funny. Now, you asked for fantasy creature, soI have a few. I'm not sure if their known, but with your skills you could probably make them known. Each of these names should be findable on the internet for a boat load of information. 1. Echenesis 2. Fire drake 3. Griffin 4. Hippocampus 5. Manticore 6. Nycticorax 7. Pheonix 8. Roc 9. Triton 10. Vegetable lamb (I'd especially like to see a story with these cuties!) 11. Wyvern 12. Xanthus (one of four flesh-eating mares. Podargus, Lampon, Deinus, and Xanthus, with Xanthus usually as the strongest) 13. Yale (yes, there is such a creature. Should be a goat with two horns) If you have any questions about any of these critters, just send me a message. ^-^!
Lady E 2008-03-26 ch 1,	abuseThis is, um, scarily tempting, considering the idea you open with. That had me wincing sporadically throughout. But if I try really hard not to think about it, it's actually kind of funny. XD A great start.
Amindaya 2008-03-25 ch 6,	abuseHaha. A vase. Here I was expecting something gruesome or dangerous. :D And it's a vase.
crazyspeedingcar 2008-03-18 ch 1,	abuseThis is really good. The beginning is ultra-pervy! i love it. I'm glad I found it! I really like your writing style. Looking foreword to reading the rest!
Amindaya 2008-03-18 ch 5,	abuseIt's funny that the Tart can 'keep hoping' and that hiring was a mistake...and she's right.
Amindaya 2008-03-18 ch 4,	abuseI love the way you describe him: glow-worm. It's like Adrian doesn't want to like him but he's unable.
Amindaya 2008-03-18 ch 3,	abuseWhat a terrifying monster, carrying around a pink parasol. Oh the horror!
Amindaya 2008-03-18 ch 2,	abuseI like how the living and the undead and supernatural all mingle. And I love catnip man.

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