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| Therese Delacoeur 2007-10-17 ch 1,  | abuseDark. But true. Not at all cliche. I agree with the other reviewer -- you forgot to type a few letters, but it didn't detract from the overall story. If you slow down, let it sit for a day or so, and then read it or have someone else read it (I'd be glad to help you out) so they can catch the little things before it makes "print." I'll also agree with what Forbidden-Rainbow said, that you've got serious talent. Keep it up! |
| Forbidden-Rainbow 2007-08-16 ch 1, | abuseI really love your symbolism and metaphors, you have such potential. But try to watch out for your time periods and spelling errors, everything happened very fast and there were a few mistakes. But that doesn't change that I like it so ^^ good job! Keep writing, you have a knack! |